|Reviews for When From Dreams You Cannot Wake|
| treetiesandcandycanecapris chapter 2 . 2/5/2006
Oh very good. I liked it... I liked it a lot.
Can't wait til the next chappie
| Banshee210 chapter 2 . 2/4/2006
| Giggly Pancakes chapter 2 . 2/4/2006
me like a lot! Please update soon this is wayy too awesome! This is crepy and I love it so please update soon!
| Rochwen-loves-Dutchy chapter 2 . 2/4/2006
keep an eye out...tee hee...and blink lost his eye...wow, radom connection there...yeah...you fianlly updated! yay! *hug* more more more!
| LyssaLa chapter 2 . 2/3/2006
I like this story! Cuz you know I am the Demon barbor of Fleet Street -Sweeney Todd
Who cooks cookies and pies -House
::Hides behind Snapes:: This is to scary for me -Draco
::Hits him:: Stop being a wimp, Malfoy -Snapes
::Sneaks up behind Snapes:: BOO! -Sessler
::Screams like a little girl:: -Snapes
This is a very interesting story, I like it -Riley
What are you doing! -Sweeney
Umm...giving a nice helpful reveiw...-Riley
Thats not what we do here! -Sweeney
We fight and bicker and make fools out of ourselfs rather their selfs -House
Why am I here? -Riley
I LOVe this story! ::Dances:: That thong tha thong thong thong! -Harry
OK, enough of that! Normally I don't like stories like this, but I really like this one! I think its really coming along and I'm so happy you updated it again! I'm so excited to see where this story goes! -
~**~There can be mircales when you believe~**~
| Rochwen-loves-Dutchy chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
i like the beginning and since you let me use pheonix, i give you Suep.
real name: Susiana Lynn
nick name: Suep
appearance: short, with curly shoulder length red hair, brown eyes
clothing: jeans and a tee shirt, normally one with horses on it, and red when ever she can(its her favorite color), reddish brown trench coat occasionaly, brown newsies hat(cause shes cool like that), also wears a key around her neck on a boot lace DJ has one just like it cause theyre friends (rileyhiggins approves of this, just so you know)
attitude: completely and utterly random. doesnt seem to think like other normal humans, does things as she sees fit
boy of choice:jack, but thats probably impossible, so blink or dutchy
hope you find her useful! cant wait for your next chapter!
| SCandCK1899 chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
You don't have to use her. Just wanted to put her in just in case. Love the story. U keep posting I'll keep reading. tata!
Name: Maddison Smith
Appearance: 5'4", skinny, tan, basically really pretty. But she doesn't think so. She has long, straight black hair, she also has grey eyes
Clothing: Very punkish with a hint of very mild goth. She also wears Chuck Taylor All Stars. Her fav pair are Hot Pink and Green ones. She wears them even though thy don't match with her outfit
Personality: Very quiet when she's around people she doesn't know. But when she's around her friends u can't shut her up. She has a dry sense of humor. But she basically laughs at everything. Very random. She calls everybody an evil leprechaun, evil goose, or her dancing monkey. I know very weird
Job: She works at a bookstore
Newsboy of choice: anybody, she could even be a loner
Newsies you'd want to be friends with: all of them ...if u want
Random facts: She loves to read. She loves shoes. She loves the colors Black and Hot Pink. Plays guitar and sings. She likes to dance. And it kills her to see her friends sad. You can do whatever u want with her. I am giving u permission.
Okay that's all folks. You don't have to use her. Just if you want to. LOVE THE STORY! SOUNDS SPOOKY! YAY!
| treetiesandcandycanecapris chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Name: Rayna Moore
Appearance: 5'6", Caramel colored hair, Comes down to about shoulder blades. Hazel colored eyes. She weighs about 130lbs.
Clothing: Faded blue jeans, blue baby tee with Batman logo on it, fading black Chucks (high-tops).
Personality: Very funny. Always finds the hmor in things. Sometimes pessimistic. Sarcastic and weird. Not like the freak people out weird but the other kind. Kind of like Gonzo from the Muppets. (that's the best way I can describe it, he he.) Friendly unless you make her mad, (well duh!), but usually friendly.
Job: Hot Topic
Newsboy of choice: Kid Blink
Newsies you'd want to be friends with: Race, Blink, Mush, any of them really.
Random facts: Interested in werid things, like Gonzo from the Muppets. Likes to say useless things, quotes movies, plays, t.v. shows, books, etc.
That's about it. If ya need to know anything else, just ask me. lol.
| but-the-clouds chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
This is great- I love it!
This is like the only modern-day fic I actually like so far and you're not even finished with it yet! Keep going, I love it!
| Here Though You've Forgotten chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
I really like the way this story is starting out!
heres my character!
Name: Janet (Janie) Antonio
Appearance: five feet square, dirty blonde hair worn in a long braid down her back, grey eyes. very pale, sunburns easily
Clothing: generally steals clothing from the newsies. she hates wearing skirts or anything tight fitting. very self concious and whe wears a worn and and faded Red Sox Cap
Personality: dry humor, sarcasm. friendly but not overly talkative. somewhat reserved at first,but has a vicious sense of fun when she gets to know afraid of hard work, pulling her own weight or helping a friend out. hates being treated like a lady like shes fragile and is gonna break
Job: paper route! and she works part time at a friends landscaping business.
Newsboy of choice: Skittery
Newsies you'd want to be friends with:
Race, Jack, Mush, Blink, Dutchy
Random facts: earned her name Dusty because she came to NYC after following a UPS truck from her previous home (where her parents died in a fire) in San Antonio. she pulled up in her beat up pick up truck where the window doesnt close all the way, completely covered in dust from all the dirt roads. She picked her last name herself because when she was 4 and her parents died in a fire (did i already mention that?) the DSS never found any birth certificate or anything and she didnt know her last name. She picked Antonio because she loved living is San Antonio. 14 foster homes changed her outlook on her home and when she was 16 and could get out of foster care, she followed a UPS truck cuz she had no where to go but she wanted to get away
use her or change her if u wana
carryin da bannah,
| WordWorm chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
thats kinda a freaky dream if you ask me- i always have dreams about bears attacking me haha i wish i had a hottie named spottie to go to in the middle of the night... then again dont we all
well anways i pretty much hate you! why? because you are TOO amazing at writing... pass some of that along to me girl! haha keep it up and update everything soon, and i am uber glad you posted a bunch of your stories :D
so guess what! (you knew it was comming)
Name: Molly O'Conner
Nickname: Penni (sounds framiliar huh? haha)
Age: 16 soon to be 17
Appearance:5'6", red curly hair (color of a Penny) to middle back (usually down, pulled back, or in french braids), fair skinned, bright brown green eyes, long legs, not strong but not weak, freckles, bright smile and cute laugh, Irish, fairly pale but it fits her
Clothing: skirts, jeans, hartails- no shorts or pants, comfortable, not revealing but fitting- like the style and size looks good, greens, aqua, blue, black, purple- pretty much any color, but likes to wear ribbons in her hair not too girlie
Personality: kind of quiet at first but easily opens up to people, listens and likes to give advice, very good at reading or understanding people, very artistic and creative (loves to draw people), funny, when annoyed or provoked can get mad, quick tempered, cant really fight, can talk her way out of any situation, natural leader, responsible, never gives up, smart and follows her instinct, gets nervous easily, likes to observe, always has the look in her eye that she knows something you don't know, very curious (can sometimes lead to problems!), lacks some confidence and can be sensitive, polite most of the time, navie, looks innocent but theres more to her people dont know, secretive around those she does not trust, always thinking very logical, lets people/ things get to her, does things her way, likes to be correct, hates to be spoken down too- shes a good talker and can hold her own in a fight/ debate or whatnot
Job: works in a bookstore in manhatten or brooklynn (you pick)
Newsboy of choice: Spot (then Jack, Blink)
Newsies you'd want to be friends with: Dutchy Skittery and any guy i dont get
Random facts: always picks her nails, gets very annoyed when people use good and well incorrectly, cracks her nuckles, likes to run- runs away from problems alot, not a morning person, likes her alone time to think and draw, a perfectionist, sometimes follows her head instead of her heart, allergic to smoke, self concious when sining or dancing, scared of anything sharp, sharks, spiders and being home alone at night, likes winter the most (because the way it looks in her hair and turns her cheeks pink)a hopeless romantic, when she likes a guy if he begins to like her then she likes a different person- she is kinda afraid of the future and commitment
kinda longish sry, you already framiliar with the character- soo yeahh
happy double o 6!
| Kiki chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Nickname:Tatle(Get copyright on that from Zelda)
Age:1 month younger than Spot!
Appearance:Bright green eyes, long wavy choclate brown hair, petite but not too skinny, not very short, like to spot's chin? Very pretty face!
Clothing:Just regular Jeans and shirts, she likes to wear a forest green, Long shirts that go bellow her hips, shits that the sleeves((of short sleeve) are loose and pretty and um...thin? and um...its hard to explain...down to earth dressy...
Personality:She likes to take long walks, and she likes to write poetry and she is kinda romantic and she is also kinda a tomboy, she isnt afraid to take risks and she is outgoing but she can be serious at times and when things are going wrong she likes to step up to help them get better!
Job:Um...idk...she volanters at an animal shelter
Newsboy of choice:SPOT! He has always been my boy in this stories Ginny so you best not change him! _
Newsies you'd want to be friends with:All of them!
Random facts:She is friends with whoever you and Kitty are in this story..and any other girls I guess...o yea and her and Jack don't get along very well...because...um...they had a fight when i wanted to take Spot somewhere and Jack told me i was a controlling freak and no one liked me!
GINNY! I BETTER HAVE SPOT!
| Giggly Pancakes chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Oh this story sounds SO good!
Name: Drea McKinley
Appearance: She has light black hair that almost looks purple and dark blue eyes. She is about 5'3" and very, very lightweight (the body of a climber). Her hair is slightly curly and falls to her waist.
Clothing: She usually wears hiking boots, a red plaid shirt and loose blue jeans.
Personality: She is bold, outgoing, harsh and cold at times and yet peaceful and calm at others. Just like the Colorado Rockies from where she gets her nick name.
Job: She is an assistant at a Rock Climbing Camp
Newsboy of choice: Spot, Skittery or whoever
Newsies you'd want to be friends with: Mush, anyone else
| Banshee210 chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
I like it so far. I'm a little nervous about Newsie stories set durring 'now' time... but you are an exceptional writer and think this will be good!
Nickname: Silva Shot
Appearance: She's tall (5'6") and always has a quizitive expression. She looks hard at people, as if figuring them out. She has light Brown hair that reaches the middle of her back, which is always in a ponytail.
Clothing: Usually a green, red, black, or dark blue shirt (That's all I own) and sweatpants. Nothing wonderful. When she has work she wears Jeans.
Personality: Very sarcastic to friends and family. If insulted (for example: You're *fill in insult*) she repets with: Well you're face is *repeat insult from person*. Loves kicking people in the shins when joking around, not hard. she's great around thoes she knows, but has trouble trusting new people without reasurrance from others.
Job: Works at a nearby Racetrack as a horse groom. Very good with horses and loves to be around them.
Newsboy of choice: Racetrack (Could you make him taller... if not that's ok)
Newsies you'd want to be friends with: Thoes who can take my hard sarcastic remarks and my kicking.
Random facts: She has trouble with her left ankle and right shoulder. She twisted her ankle, but never saw a doctor of did much so it didn't heal right (she now thinks she did more than twist it). Every now and then it starts to hurt (not too bad, but annoying). If she sits on her ankle wrong or lands from a high space she'll have to limp a few steps before it really comes back to normal. Can only run with a slight limp. Her shoulder was popped when tearing down a set at school and has trouble with it getting tired a lot easier.
Tell me if you need more :)
| Lady of Tir Na Nog chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
hey sent you my cc info on e-mail incase you get reported for the story anywho, hope you can use her.. good luck with the new chapter