|Reviews for Ladies Night|
| Anon chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
There were however a few hitches in your execution.
1) Mind your time period while you're writing. Since there was nothing to state this was an AU piece I assume it was set in the canon timeframe, but many of your situations made it seem as if it were occuring in modern contemporary times. Think about society and language back then (ex. dance clubs would have been quite a different idea, and certain character names would better fit the era)
2) I had trouble understanding why she was so intent on drinking...even when she knew how tragic the repercussions could be. This doesn't seem characteristic of most expecting mothers LEAST of all Evelyn who is generally quite cautious and "by the book".
| x.ShatteredImage.x chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Loved it! All your stories rock!
| Lost Phoenix chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Wicked Story, but at this rate Evy's gonna be in prison herself!
| Evelyn Carnahan-O'Connell chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
the sequel is great so far! i got sucked in real quick on it and couldn't stop reading it. luving it a lot! :)
| Cookie044 chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
I liked it...I am surprised Rick did not get really angry like he has the rep for...but I guess he loves preggers Evy too much. Keep up the great writing as always.