Reviews for Abby's jelousy
Reported chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
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wally's girlfriend chapter 2 . 3/31/2006
Theres not that many explaintions but it's still good! PLEASE UPDATED SOON! I CAN'T WAIT TILL NEXT CHAP!
Ultimate Fan chapter 2 . 1/9/2006
Um... do not feel offended, but you could use some pointers: Try to be more descriptive about what the characters are doing and thinking. For example:

Kerri:ok. (sleeps)

In this case, we have no clue if Kerri went to sleep to her room, or if she fell asleep right where she was.

Anyway, good luck, and keep on writing so you can gain experience. Also, please check my Chicken Little story "A New Friendship" in this same category.
Ultimate Fan chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
Nice try. Keep it up, and try to make longer chapters.
Soul of Hell chapter 2 . 1/8/2006
update when you can! i like this story
Spooky-Cider chapter 2 . 1/2/2006
Very cute! Keep writing.
Soontobemoved chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
neat story! but you do need to work on your spelling. its Jealousy not jelusy.