Reviews for Complications
Eliche chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Really liked it. Very nice.
Nr.Six chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
great story!
GillianRose chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
great story - I thought the dialogue was well done - what happens next?
Creedog VanDrey chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
Well done. Well done. I'm always wary of any romance of FFN, but I'd be going out of my way to criticize this one. It was really that enjoyable. I wish it was longer, but trying to add more vignettes might be dangerous if they're not as good. Keep writing, please. You give me faith in amateur writers everywhere.
thinktink2 chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
Great job. Captured their characters very well. I hope you have more planned, I would love to read it!
KBecks87 chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
sweet, a good read
Vampbarbie chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
' It ain’t no laughing matter, Inara. This thing we’ve got going on is right dangerous to my mental health.”

She laughed. “Your mental health?”

“I got a sensitive ego.”

“No, you don’t.”

“Alright, I don’t. '

Perfect! I can hear Nathan saying this!
The Noble French Fry chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Hmm... Interesting... Actually, I can picture Mal going out and finding Inara's clients and shooting them... :D
RitzBitz chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
that was awesome, really amazing. i hope to read more from you.

oh, and you might want to consider accepting anonymous reviews. just a thought