Reviews for Snapshots of an Alternate Universe
Karahly chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Very interesting! You should really consider wrapping it up though...it would be cool to see how the whole story plays out now that Lei'ella is married.

Anyways, awesome writing skillz!_
bywthedragon chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Very original. Promises to be interesting. And you vary your sentence structure, which is cool, 'cos noone one seems to do that. Keep writing!
Forestwater chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
YAY for Acheron in all his excellentness!

Well, I too am a Varden-Lei'ella shipper, but i think is is very very awesome!

But . . . .when does this take place? Should i know that already?

are you continuing? I should know that, too, right?

. . .
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
being a varden/lei'ella shipper, i wasn't sure i wanted to read this based on the summary. but i must say that this is extremely well done. i loved your hints to the story line, like the sneaky thief named Markus, and especially the flip-flopped line about looting, pillaging...the innocent populace, it amused me. i like your characterizations and plot, and would be very curious on how this story turns out, so keep writing!
Tahn chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
I liked it, I seriously don't think she would have married him but that's what fanfic is for _ But it deffinatly sets up a sequel. Lemme know if you make another one.
ConspiringDarkness chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
I really liked it, considering, it's based in an alternate universe anyways. You can follow along the entire story of Inverloch like this. That would be wonderful...do continue!
Magic Bear chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
Good, I guess, but Lei'ella has to end up with Varden!
Faolan01 chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
I really like this story, you got everyone's personalities down perfectly. Will you continue it? I Can't wait to read more.

Faolan
DarkChocolate21 chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
sabrina: wow. i really like this story, i think you need to continue!
Mean Man chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
The plot idea's good, but I think the overall story could use some more work and attention. I can't realy word it very well, but it feels a bit like you finished it under time pressure or something. I think you'd do a lot better if you'd take some more time.
Writer of Dreams chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
You have serious problems! Berard and Lei'ella? Nuh-uh! That just does not work for me. The guy was despicable, besides, he's dead now. _
Nightswift chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Omg, dolph, you are...evil. EVIL i say _ Well, I guess it's a change from all the varden fics popping up...But couldn't you have written about Nei'renn or Acheron? _ Lei'ella and Berard married...-faints and twitches-