Reviews for Snapshots of an Alternate Universe
Karahly chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Very interesting! You should really consider wrapping it up would be cool to see how the whole story plays out now that Lei'ella is married.

Anyways, awesome writing skillz!_
bywthedragon chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Very original. Promises to be interesting. And you vary your sentence structure, which is cool, 'cos noone one seems to do that. Keep writing!
Forestwater chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
YAY for Acheron in all his excellentness!

Well, I too am a Varden-Lei'ella shipper, but i think is is very very awesome!

But . . . .when does this take place? Should i know that already?

are you continuing? I should know that, too, right?

. . .
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
being a varden/lei'ella shipper, i wasn't sure i wanted to read this based on the summary. but i must say that this is extremely well done. i loved your hints to the story line, like the sneaky thief named Markus, and especially the flip-flopped line about looting, pillaging...the innocent populace, it amused me. i like your characterizations and plot, and would be very curious on how this story turns out, so keep writing!
Tahn chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
I liked it, I seriously don't think she would have married him but that's what fanfic is for _ But it deffinatly sets up a sequel. Lemme know if you make another one.
ConspiringDarkness chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
I really liked it, considering, it's based in an alternate universe anyways. You can follow along the entire story of Inverloch like this. That would be continue!
Magic Bear chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
Good, I guess, but Lei'ella has to end up with Varden!
Faolan01 chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
I really like this story, you got everyone's personalities down perfectly. Will you continue it? I Can't wait to read more.

DarkChocolate21 chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
sabrina: wow. i really like this story, i think you need to continue!
Mean Man chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
The plot idea's good, but I think the overall story could use some more work and attention. I can't realy word it very well, but it feels a bit like you finished it under time pressure or something. I think you'd do a lot better if you'd take some more time.
Writer of Dreams chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
You have serious problems! Berard and Lei'ella? Nuh-uh! That just does not work for me. The guy was despicable, besides, he's dead now. _
Nightswift chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Omg, dolph, you are...evil. EVIL i say _ Well, I guess it's a change from all the varden fics popping up...But couldn't you have written about Nei'renn or Acheron? _ Lei'ella and Berard married...-faints and twitches-