|Reviews for Team 8|
| VOICE OF REASON chapter 22 . 3/12
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| LittleKnitt chapter 1 . 3/11
Holy moly, this fanfic is awesome! I LOVE kurenai in this! Shows the sweet side in her, though i was hoping it WOULD be a 4 cell team cause i just love shinoxhinataxkiba triple. :3
| Peter chapter 14 . 3/11
wanderer. Dude. Shut the fuck up! If you don't like the fucking pairing, then get the fuck out of here. S'TarKan, I hope you continue this story. It's my third time reading it and I can't wait until you update. Take care!
| Noel Ardnek chapter 21 . 3/9
I adore this fanfiction. It is so well written, and the fact that you have accounted for every effect in the "ripple" caused by Kurenai choosing Naruto as part of her genin squad is so wonderful. It creates an alternate universe in which different dominoes are stacked and fall because of the CHOICES people make in this story.
Shino and Hinata were given much more depth than they have been given in canon, and for that I sincerely thank you. Also a more powerful Naruto than in canon makes sense because you've expressly stated that if someone had nurtured him carefully then he would advance more quickly, and you delve into Naruto's psychology as well.
I cannot express enough how much I have enjoyed reading this story, and how sad I was to discover that it's been months since the last update with no word on what has been delaying one. I don't know much about your personal life which is why I and many others are in the dark, but if you could post a notice or a new chapter or any indication on how the progression of the story is going, that would be very appreciated.
| Darkdrago342 chapter 3 . 3/8
Love it :3
| Sorasdream chapter 20 . 3/7
Just for a second there I thought, the fox would kill Kisame or Itachi. Good riddance to bad rubbish.
So now Jiraiya's got 4 kids to look after, I'm sure he'll be happy with that...Not! lol
| Lazuli chapter 22 . 3/7
Well, I definitely hope you find some time to continue writing soon! I'm of two minds if it would be better to have a timeskip of 6 months or to see/read about the important moments of these next 6 months.
And congrats to the unusual twist with the turtle summoning contract. tough I have ti admit to feeling some regret about Naruto not getting the toads. I absolutely love them!
| Wanderer chapter 14 . 3/7
Oh I do so hope Hinata dies. It would make such a wonderous plot twist, after constantly beating us over the head with this blatant NARUHINA PAIRING.
I know she probably won't, and only have to read on to find out, but...Well, while writing this, I can just pretend she'll die, and enjoy myself
| Sorasdream chapter 15 . 3/7
It's horrible that Hinata has such a crippling amount of self- doubt. We can only hope that with time and encouragement she'll get better.
Hmmmm...so we haven't seen pervy sage yet? Is he going to be in this story?
I was wondering, if Naruto needs to learn some more jutsu, other than just tai? I mean although, tai is good and all, it would be good for him to have some more things under his cap for the finals eh?
| Lazuli chapter 20 . 3/7
Nooooo! That... that... No fair! Poor Kurenai!
And poor Naru and Hinata! What are they gonna do now? Kurenai was their boulder of strength. Poor team 8. Horrible you. ;P
I honestly thought 'what the fuck? That can't be true!' when I read that scene. That was so unexpected, I was pretty floored and uncertain if I wanted to continue reading in that moment. thatreminded me so much of another story named A Teacher's Glory I think.
So, now I'm pretty interested how you're going to pull Naruto and Hinata out of this hell hole. Please continue soon.
| Sorasdream chapter 10 . 3/6
It's hilarious in a retarded way how Kiba and Sakura recalled their mission in Wave as some sort of melodramatic movie. I guess how Sakura conveniently forgot to mention that she was worthless during the mission didn't come up, but hey no one else mentioned either right? It figures they would have failed the primary mission objective after all; because really for all the crap in saying Naruto was the dead-last his kage shadow clone justsu at that point in the canon made up for Sasuke recklessness and Sakura doing nothing.
I understand why Naruto didn't say anything about their mission. After all it's regardless of what happened it isn't a school yard game for them. And of the 3 teams it's Naruto that's actually made the most improvement, so keeping their abilities close is also going to be a good strategy for them.
this was a great chapter!
| jwbones2000 chapter 22 . 3/6
Man, great story. Looking forward to future updates... hopefully soon. lol.
| Sorasdream chapter 5 . 3/6
Wow, Hinata's father is a jackass. I wonder if the person he 'killed' from Kurenai's team was someone who was a son from a Hyuuga and an outsider? Or some branch member that Hiashi didn't like.
I wonder if it's the two retarded village elders that are trying to get the civilians from serving Naruto(not that they wouldn't want to anyways). Those two are seriously unnecessary and should be put down along with Danzo.
Anyhow, it's nice to see Naruto and team 8 improving.
| Sorasdream chapter 1 . 3/6
Sounds great so far!
I like that Kurenai is shown in a positive light in this fic, not that mind when she finds Naruto annoying and unskilled but it makes more sense to think of her like this.
In the canon Kakashi was team seven's sensei he seemed to favor Sasuke and didn't make as much time for Naruto. Either he was a lazy ass or he didn't think Naruto had any skills, I think it was a combination of these facts but either way it worked out horrible for Naruto. I honestly think that Naruto would have done better on any team other than 7 with Sakura the retarded fangirl and Sasuke the emo.
| scorpioneldar chapter 22 . 3/6
i would like you to update soon i really love this story
thank you for the hard work on this so far
good job hope you update soon!