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Killing kurenai completely extinguished any interest I had in ever completing this fanfiction.

The small blue turtle that spits water being called Squirtle had me dying laughing!

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Ooh! Kind of bringing that Bleach concept of emotions affecting the mindscape here!

I'm expecting the Turtle sage to look like Master Oogway.

Forgot to mention that the Sandaime is a chainsmoker. Those lungs need a lot of healing!

This is incredibly well written that I'm rather surprised I've not come across this in my searches on here previously, thanks for writing this even if it has entered hiatus-hell.

Has anyone else figured out that "The Four" were probably supposed to be the "Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles" and "The Friend of All Children" was probably supposed to be Gamera the kaiju turtle.

I keep rereading this. I think I comment at different points each time, idk. it's very good. it's not long, it's not finished, but lands on a satisfying note. the author is remarkably capable of getting the reader (me) invested in the characters, and the story progresses nicely. it induces a wide variety of emotions, has a very firm internal logic, and a clear understanding of the source material.

I hope whoever this is kept writing, potentially on stuff they can actually sell. this level of writing, improved with time and experience lends itself well to a more formally structured book.

good luck to the author with whatever they're doing these days

fuck you. I'm so mad. why does an author with just enough skill to get us invested in their characters choose pain?

imma keep reading, but I came very close to immediately leaving when you did that. ouch. dont punch my heart like that. good luck with whatever you're doing today

this was a fantastic fic and i wish there was more. as it is, it ends in a magnificent place where i can trust everything will be fine, it's a good happilyEver after it's a very read.