Reviews for Team 8
Dan Ingram chapter 10 . 12/10/2006
Woo! Awesome chapter. Hard to believe we're 10 kick ass chapters in and we're just at the chuunin exam. I liked Shino's precise confrontation with the clan elders (don't care what his exact position within the clan is either. Does it really matter?), the recap of the Bridge arc gone wrong, and Naruto not bragging in the face of guys who were down and out. I'm mildly curious though, did you leave Haku alive for any particular reason? What I loved best was how Hinata kept Naruto's 'secret' from her father. Go girl! I just hope she does better in the exam than she did in canon *crosses fingers*

And just for future reference, I'm going to leave out the comments 'nothing is out of character', simply because you've demonstrated that you have a strong handle on all the character's personalities that you've written. From Naruto, to Guy to Kurenai. If I feel I see something 'wrong', I'll let you know. Otherwise, keep up the great work!
kobisaki chapter 6 . 12/10/2006
great chapter!
Marz1 chapter 10 . 12/10/2006
wow, another great chapter! so is team seven going to find out about team eight's success, since Kiba's mom was one of the tracks? is Naruto going to meet Haku? update soon! this story is so great!
Visceral Epiphany chapter 3 . 12/10/2006
well i think we are all in favour of the death of sasuke and sakura...

kiba is getting on my nerves but has hit a soft spot yet...

oher than that...wot is kurenai to him? a motherly figure? and older sister? or just his sensei?
Visceral Epiphany chapter 2 . 12/9/2006
why does kishimoto always choose the worst ways to pan out the manga?...

i love this story...its great...
kobisaki chapter 5 . 12/9/2006
great chapter! can't wait to read their first C-rank mission!
AznPuffyHair chapter 10 . 12/9/2006
U do kno that it doesn't matter if it follows the actual manga story line right? It's fanfic for a reason

Anyway, good job. And i think Shino's mom is pretty pissed when she learn what Shino was considering

RIPSinners chapter 10 . 12/9/2006
Ya know...It actually sounds like the bridge incident turned out better-All things considered. Tazuna died, but at the risk of sounding callous, it was a minimal loss in terms of life.

Haku was young and pure of heart, that kind of life is unquestionably worth more than one that is almost spent.

However, the Wave country still has a low morale, even with it's surpressor removed. Inari will need to find courage elsewhere...
Sennyu Megami chapter 10 . 12/9/2006
You are a pure genius at playing Shino. I'm awestruck.
Freedomforlove chapter 10 . 12/9/2006
Loved the update hope you can get another chapter out soon, Nice plot and everything i cant wait for the next chapter keep doing what you do
kobisaki chapter 4 . 12/9/2006
great chapter! seems like things will begin to get serious from now on!
Sean chapter 10 . 12/9/2006
Thank you so much for updating, this is an amazingly good story in my book. I hope to see more whenever you get the next one out.
Riiiceballe chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
~Meow~ Nice chapter! It's great. Hope the chapters ahead will be just as good or even better
ravengal chapter 10 . 12/9/2006
Whoa. _ Rock on, Shino! You kicked ass when it came to your relatives!

Also... wow. The events that took place in the bridge-builder mission were very similar to canon, I saw... with a couple of vital exceptions... like... you killed off Tazuna? Poor guy...

Excellent chapter, as always. Oh and I made a small eroor in my last review that I never bothered to correct. I meant to say, 'and he almost figured out HER feelings for him too", not him! *hits self* Gomen for that hideous mistake.

One last thing: Lee getting drunk and attacking Neji? XD Haha. Loved it. So funny. I can see it now... "The powa ov yoush is wishin you!" XD XD XD

ravengal out x
Valkyrie Nienna Helyanwe chapter 10 . 12/9/2006
I really like this story. Just thought I should get that out of the way P hehe. But anyway, this is very well written and worded, well thought out, and that sets it apart from a lot of the stories you see here, especially in the anime sections. (I can attest to this, as I read A LOT, and my stories are crappily written too, hehe) It makes me glad I have firefox, and I have the dictionary add-on cause some of those words Shino uses, just make me go huh? Your characterizations are so well thought out that it is amazing...taking the blank slates in Naruto and turing them into major is wild.

I sincerely look forward to your next update...
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