|Reviews for Team 8|
| New Moon Werewolf chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
YEA, AN UPDATE!
Wonderfully written as usual. I just LOVED how Shino gave his clan a tongue-lashing (as much as one can do without yelling) and said he would rather leave his clan than see his teammate thought badly of. YOU ROCK, SHINO!
I also like how you showed Lee getting drunk... I have sparred with someone who also watches Naruto and was doing her imitation of a drunken Lee... she was more dangerous than she usually is... *shudders*
And the Chuunin exams are coming up now; can't wait!
- New Moon Werewolf
| Veridius chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
Like how you changed the protect Tazuna ending, I don't think I've ever seen one where Tazuna dies.
On a related note, I have a fealing that the council is going to manipulate Haku into attacking Naruto.
| PopeYodaI chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
Wow, Shino just tore his entire clan a new one right there, didn't he? It's damn impressive how well you managed to weave his confrontation with his clan into a concievable work. 'Till my next review :)
Pope Yoda I
| Kai Dragoon chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
Love the scene with Shino and his clan, shows the intelligence behind the bugs, the coat and the shades. Never think I saw a fic where a Team 7 without Naruto came back with Haku(although the Tazuna dying was a nice touch). Wonder if he be in it later I can see him understanding Naruto, but since they haven't met yet it be more difficult for that interaction.
| Monaki-cheung chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
great chappie! i luv it! hurry update
| blackangel chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| imgonnadie chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
Very good. Please do continue to write.
| Shadow Eclipse chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
| Kuno-Baby chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
Ooh! This is the first Naruto fanfic that I have really been able to get into. Nice work and keep it up! I can't imagine having anything to say that could help you do a better job - you're beyond the best I could come up with.
| RandomTopic chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
One, wouldn't it make more sense for Tsunami or Inari to have died if no one had been at their house to protect them from the samurai?
Two, I don't find Tazuna's death believable. A gangster again wounded shinobi wouldn't have been able to catch them off guard, and Kakashi's team should have been protecting Tazuna at that time.
| Almon chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
I am at a lose for words. This story as a whole is quite amazing. I am enjoying the characterization of Kurenai. I also thoroughly enjoy the logical thinking of Shino. How do you do that? Does it take you a while to work through Shino's logical way of thinking? Do you normally think that logically? I know I don't. P I was looking forward to Shino's confrontation with the clan's elders and I was not disappointed with that scene. It was great. ) Keep up the great work.
| MasterBrattan chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
i just love this fic, one of these days i'm going to add it to my favorite stories list, which has yet to be born
| Miss Apollo chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
yay! chunnin exams! im so glad u updated! the chapter was, of course, amazing. i never really cared about shino when watching the show, but i totally love him in the story! cant wait for the exams, especially with team 7. update when ya can happy holidays!
| Mistress DragonFlame chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
Yay! I've not been getting a lot of story up-dates lately, so this one was rgeat to get.
I liked how you've saved Haku, but did you have to kill Tazuna? I mean, he survived till the very end of the battles, to be killed by an /arrow/.
But, I guess, it does give a realistic feel to the thing.
| Itallia chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
That's an interesting way to introduce the change. Usually people just change it as "another option." I liked Shino's stand against his councel, and how Team 7 still managed to survive their mission. I also have to wonder how Haku being alive and in the village will change things. Surely he'll meet Team 8 eventually. It was also a bold twist to have Tazuna die-not many are willing to kill such...well, not really important, but side-main characters. I like how you changed the mission-it worked well.
Can't wait to read the Chuunin exams-it really will be interesting seeing Teams 7 and 8 battling it out. Later.