|Reviews for Team 8|
| Regrem Erutaerc chapter 4 . 4/19/2006
Just had a few ideas.
Due to all the changes you have given to their timeline, it is sure to cause Team 8 as well as Lee and Tenten to become stronger, and Kiba to be weaker due to the lack of training that Kakashi provides. After all, in the original timeline, Lee didn't have anyone to spar with on equal terms, Tenten didn't have someone to train with, neither of them had any good genjutsu training, yet now, they do. And, Kiba doesn't have the great training that he did in the original timeline, though he still will have improved noticably enough due to a friendly rivalry with Sasuke.
And, Hinata will do better against Neji when she fights him due to the extra confidense and training, including weight training, though she'll still lose quite badly.
And Naruto was able to keep up with Sasuke in the original timeline with nearly no training and no sparring, yet in this one, he not only gets great training but also a very worthy amount of sparring partners.
In short, I think they'd annihalate Team 7, and definately completely change all of their outlooks on the members of Team 8. I wonder how Sakura's point of view will change due to it?_ I still support Naru/Hina a lot more, but I still like the little love quadrangle there._
But, just because they'd be far better than Team 7(despite team 7 surviving that dangerous 'C rank' mission), doesn't mean that they'd do so well against the other shinobi during the chuunin exams. I am curious, though, as to how well Naruto does during part one of those tests this time around._
And I agree with most of the reviewers that have mentioned it. Now that she's getting to know Naruto, I think it'd be quite likely for Tenten to also fall for him, ESPECIALLY due to that genjutsu disruption technique that Naruto did. And imagine how she'd be like if she found out just to what extent the shockwave reached... I'm very curious as to how her viewpoint would be on that._
I'm also curious as to how it'd be like when Konohamaru and his friends are introduced, and also when the Sexy no Jutsu will be introduced and how they'll react to it.
Oh, and if it's just supposed to be an illusion, how is it that when Naruto used it to become a shuriken when they first fought Zabuza on the show, how did it still fly? Just a random thought.
And I still like it when you give viewpoints on other characters. I wonder how Shino would be thinking of if Naruto suggested that if chakra is a part of every living thing, why can't his bugs develop more techniques than the ones that Shino provides for them? After all, he has trained them so well already, so he should be able to give them such extra training if he can figure out how.
Note, these are just some random ideas on my part, but they may come in handy later._ Can't wait for the next update._
| HitokiriFelix chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
See, almost 10 reviews on chapter 4.
Don't feel the pressure. Feel the worship.
| The Mad shoe1 chapter 4 . 4/18/2006
| Linalyna chapter 4 . 4/18/2006
excuse me for my bad english because i'm french. I love your story so much ! I think this story is making me hate Kakashi and Sakura and Sasuke (no!)... I just wish this really happened to Naruto!
I love it! The chapters are long, Kurenai is nicer than Kakashi, I love Hinata, Shino and that Naruto! I can't wait for the chunin exam!
Please update soon!
ps:Wahou! 955 reviews for 4 chapters! Your story is that great!... of course it is!
... sorry for my english...
| Ashrial chapter 4 . 4/17/2006
| SLAMU-ShiCat chapter 4 . 4/17/2006
This seems like a well thought out story line, and I feel giddy waiting for some NaruHina every chapter. One thing that reguarly throws me off is that I don't know when you are changing scenes. Might I suggest a pagebrake such as -? I really like the one or two line quips such as "his live and let live attitude ended where his ramen began" :) That seems to sum it up quite nicely.
| Nekotsume chapter 4 . 4/16/2006
I'm crying of happiness here... I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS TO NO END. I really can't describe how much I love this. I just wish this had really happened to Naruto. (This fic is sort of making me hate Kakashi, though... XD Kurenai is so much nicer to Naruto! I always DID think he played favourites with Sasuke...) It just makes me unbelievably happy to read about Naruto doing well and Hinata doing well, and that's an interesting personality on Shino, too. And I think reading about proper basic training gives me weird, twisted pleasure because of some odd personality quirk. (Everyone thinks my way of playing Final Fantasy is really odd...I try to cover everything...train everyone everything and prepare for everything because it's lovely and symmetric and sensible.)
I think I look forward to reading more of this more than...about any books I've ever read. I can think of ONE literary production I've enjoyed reading this much. o_o I didn't know fanfiction could be THIS enjoyable. ...You have a fan. I worship.
| Elfrowen chapter 4 . 4/16/2006
Well done! I love it. Please update soon!
| Elfrowen chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
This is very good! I give it two thumbs up. Excellent job on development.
| Sicklen chapter 4 . 4/15/2006
Awesome, I can't write much because I have to watch FMA BUT THAT WAS JUST AWESOME. Sorry but it was, please update soon so I won't have to sulk all day tell you do. Please have a nice day. -Bows deeply-
| Justagirlcalledbob chapter 4 . 4/15/2006
yay they are slightly respecting him noWPELAS UPDATE
| TrekFan101 chapter 4 . 4/15/2006
Nice! Easily one of the best Naruto fanfics on this site. And I am partial to long chapters.. :) I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.
| wyldcat chapter 4 . 4/15/2006
Woah. Amazing story! And I hope you update soon!
| VenomLord chapter 4 . 4/14/2006
I like the way the story is going, and the changes done to Naruto. I can't wait till the next chapter is up though.
| Dastek chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Excellent Story! It does make more sense to put Naruto on Team 8 instead of Team 7 the team that consists of the two people that hate him the most out the rookie 9 ;
But anyway once again Great Job! I hope to see it updated soon