Reviews for Team 8
Shidyk D. Shade chapter 10 . 12/12/2006
You have a very solid grasp in your writing style, that I wish I could copy as well as Kakashi's Sharingan could. I am humbled by your writing style, and the relationship you gave Naruto with Hinata and Shino is one that I find both intruguing and captivating.

I expect to read more of Team 8 and their accomplishments!

Shidyk D. Shade (One Piece fan and Naruto lover extroardinare) XD
Visceral Epiphany chapter 10 . 12/12/2006
so haku is alive...wots ur pland for him/her? and can sumone please take out the kusangi that has been duplicated and stuck up kiba's and is slowly coming out of sasuke's butt...
Visceral Epiphany chapter 9 . 12/11/2006
“You did better than you knew,” does that imply that naruto is his (arashi's) son?

and it is very interesting to see shino's attitude change...
Visceral Epiphany chapter 8 . 12/11/2006
are u gonna reveal who naruto's dad was eventually? cose i want to find out wether or not u made it the fourth...cose that would make naruto even more determined...and wen is his 'talk' with the kyuubi going to happen? and is the kyuubi gonna turn hostile or are they gonna become frends?
nikasont chapter 10 . 12/11/2006
I love how long your chapters are not to mention the plot line
DarkRage chapter 10 . 12/11/2006
Wicked! Naruto Teaming up with Hinata and Shino was something of shere brilliance! I just got done reading all the chapters posted. And well I'm hoping that the story continues on!

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
Peaches-Destroyer chapter 10 . 12/11/2006
wow, this story is really good! Is it going to be NaruHina, or what? (i dont mind either way)

I love, love, LOVE how you kept everyone in character, yet you're still manageing to like, change their personalitys (if that made sense)!

please update soon!

your newest fan,

Jennie
DarkJackel chapter 10 . 12/11/2006
Ah yes, Lee's drunken rampage. Good stuff.

Shino's taking of his clan to task was done very well, same with hoe Hinata handled her father. I do look forward to the Chuunin exam in this fic.

Thanks for the chapter.

-_-Me-_-
Fionn The Otaku chapter 10 . 12/11/2006
Hm, looks like Sauske has become less likely to join Orochimaru and even if he does join the Pedo-Snake he probably won't become such a puppet. He may even rethink blindly following the path Itachi set him on.

Kakashi unsupriseingly had no confidence in Naruto's abilities, even in cannon he showed little interest or confidence in Naruto's ninja skills until the currant story arc. Which is a little strange considering that Yondaime is quite likely Naruto's father and at the very least the two strongely resemble each other.

Hinata seems to be developing a sort of Inner Hinata that keeps pushing through to the surface in small ways such as being snippy with receptionist and lieing to her father.
Your Name Here chapter 10 . 12/11/2006
Wow... I am left totally and completely speechless at your writing ability. I was told about this story by my friend New Moon Werewolf, and I JUST LOVE IT!

Especially the latest chapter...

Shino standing up to the clan elders for the injustice his teammate is facing and telling them he was going to ask to be removed from the clan rather than allow himself to be part of a clan who thinks wrongly of Naruto ... GO SHINO-KUN!

I also love how Hinata practiacally lied to her father about Naruto - she just keeps getting stronger and braver around Naruto! GO HINATA-CHAN! I hope she'll pass the Chuunin exams...

And Naruto... his transformation throughout your story is amazing, and his affect on his teammates, opening them up to their full potental, and their positive affect on him. It's also great to see how unchanged Sasuke, Sakura and Kakashi are since they're not around Naruto. They don't deserve you, Naruto; Hinata-chan, Shino-kun and Kurenai-sensei do!

And now the Chuunin exams are almost here... can't wait!

And lastly, S'TarKan, to be honest, I MUCH prefer this to the real thing. Update as soon as you are able, please!

You're an awesome writer, S'TarKan! Keep Writing!

-/*(-)*\- [Your Name Here]
Oxi-Nu chapter 10 . 12/11/2006
Awesome new chapter - keep it up!
kobisaki chapter 9 . 12/11/2006
great chapter! wow shino is beggining to pick things from naruto! what's next lol!
Visceral Epiphany chapter 7 . 12/11/2006
so the fact that naruto killed them all did not come into the light? and will naruto learn to open the 8 gates? cose that would mean meditation and he would be able to contact the kyuubi without everyone else half dead...
Visceral Epiphany chapter 6 . 12/11/2006
naruto should have killed those idiotic shinobi...they deserved it...
kobisaki chapter 8 . 12/11/2006
great chapter! with a lot of development!
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