Reviews for After the Impact
Kotetsu 117 chapter 5 . 4/22/2007
This is good
Forever Rahhel chapter 5 . 3/20/2006
Hey, that's damn good story and Shinji got to the 3rd base before their 1st date.
Frost-EVA-04 chapter 5 . 3/4/2006
Doing great. But you need to update. Id like to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
Skeith Inus Magnus chapter 4 . 1/17/2006
i really like your style of writting. Hope to read more soon.

M
Soul Raider 116 chapter 3 . 1/10/2006
Cute and funny, but you need to work on your grammar. You have a bad habit of switching between tenses. It's a good story though, and fairly in character.

I also recommend that you work on adding more detail to your writing.

You have potential though, so keep it up.
Marine Brother Shran chapter 3 . 1/7/2006
lol indeed, she's back, and ow, damn that had to hurt. lookin forward to the next chpt. well anyways, that's all from me

Cheers Ja ne
Incognito girl chapter 3 . 1/7/2006
heeheehee. nice chapter. but they need to be longer!
Incognito girl chapter 2 . 1/6/2006
aw. i think i feel a full on waff chapter coming up. and wat was it that touji had?
Marine Brother Shran chapter 2 . 1/6/2006
your grammar was fine. i saw no flaws. and although i'm not big in S/A pairings, this is turning out to be interestin. i'll keep my eye on this for a while. well anyways, that's all from me

Cheers Ja ne
Incognito girl chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
hey there. why is asuka like that? are you going to do any flash backs to what happened right after TI? Hope to read another chapter soon_
Marine Brother Shran chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
interesting...could've been longer and a bit more informative...but i suppose i'll have to wait till the next chapter...well anyways, that's all from me

Cheers Ja ne