Reviews for Tongue Twisted
ethicsforsale chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
So I'm reviewing four years later. But this definitely deserves some feedback.

Your characterization is spot-on and the humor in your story made me grin. I especially like Osaka.

K, reading your other stories now.
Chris chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Hahah

You're born to write Osaka :)
Peanuts Factory chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
Hilirious :0
Bohemian456 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Lolz! Osaka is so funny like that.
A Gentleman Of Leisure chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
I love your Azu-fictions. I've read them through once already, and I'm back for another fix. Osaka is just perfect in this, as is Tomo. Great work.

"A Gentleman of Leisure" (also aka AGOL)
Icecreamsandwiches chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
lol this is funny. you should write another chapter
Mizamour chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
This is amazing! The best Azu fic I have read... wonderful! Amazing! Hilarious! This made me laugh out loud several times... I love it! And the tongue twister explanations... brilliant... and Sakaki's wondering if a fraidy cat was cute... you should write the series! :D
The.Hoppy chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Well, this one made me laugh. Poor Yukari. Outsmarted by Osaka.
dorothy chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
that made me giggle. great characterization of osaka. awesome job!
ThebigW chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Classic Osaka. I love her to death. You make her into the "unknown" genius, kind of like Mihoshi. I would only ask for a brief pause and a few eye blinks before she answers as the gears whirr in her head...

Only nit I saw were these:

"Wrong!" Tomo leaped up in the air in triumph. Not (every) far though, since she wasn't athletic.

I mean, if it can't, then the answer is none. And even if it can you still don't know (how) much it would do.

So many delight(ful) 'l's, which the Japanese tongue would butcher.

Please continue your wonderful AD submissions.

W.
AngelofMercy86 chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
LOL the last part of the story was perfect!
Ess Tii Eph Yu chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Aside from a very few bad spots of poor grammar, this fanfic is very good. Light, funny, can be seen happening in the series itself. Nice job.
funvince chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
I found the first half to be quite clever, and the second half with the tongue twisters was just plain funny. And you're right. Most of these sayings make no sense whatsoever.
hurpdurpppp chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Sheer brilliance.
SailorCreative chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
That story was really funny! The characters weren't out of character, and it sounded like something that would actually have happened in Azumanga Daioh! xD I've been looking through quite a few as of late, and it's refreshing to find one as good as yours. I hope you write more like this in the future. V
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