What a judgmental bitch

I like the Oh iOh/i line. All of your nine/rose/jack stories are awesome. )

Very nice! I like the slightly biased view of Rose, and the way Lynda really puts her own voice in the story.

I liked it. Short and sweet, and about one of my favourite episodes. What more could you want? :D

nice. I like Lynda's POV (even if she did call Rose a slut) this was a "sweet" story, lol

Lovely. Lynda with a "Y" was spot on! This is one of my favorite styles of fanfiction, written about one of my favorite episodes. Poor rose always seems to get the short end of the stick, doesn't she?

I know you wrote this ages ago, but I couldn't just read this and leave without comment, it is absolutely brilliant. I really like the concept, and Lynda's voice comes across nicely as an outside view on the three of them. brilliant.

I love this little humourous snippit out of a mostly brutally depressing episode. It's a wonderful last line, you can hear her voice.

:D Great work.

Interesting. I remember watching the show and wondering if rose was really dead and they were going to replace her with Lynda. I like the tone you gave the narative; it feels very much like Lynda. I can picture her thinking these things. I like it.

Loved this story! Brilliantly done, from Lynda's POV...

Keep writing!