|Reviews for A Success, of Sorts|
| Lrnd chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
i really liked it.
| HallucinatingDreams chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
That was so pretty and creative. This is the second work of yours I've read, and already I'm starting to think you're one of those authors who will become a gigantic hit in a few months.
| prittee1 chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
Oh my god.
this has to be one of the best fanfics ive ever read, and i have read a lot.
thankyou so much for this.
permission to print it out so i can read it whenever i want?
| animerocksjapanrocks chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
this fic is really good keep up the good work Luv Renee
| bananas chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
wow, i am still reeling after that. i'm actually surprised the story hasn't recieved more reviews. i love the style, and even though i think the whole "if i die i'm a free of dumbledores vow" thing is a little cheesy, i think that it was excellently written and i enjoyed the plot all the same. this was actually the first SS/HG that i have read and even though it is written in something i didn't expect, the story is still really impressive and i hope to read a lot more like this. oh, and i really did like the little one liners in there like 'a man is only worth his work'. really REALLY good stuff
| Romulus chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Interesting one-shot. I liked it a lot!
| Mel J1701 chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
Beautifully written. I loved the whole idea of Snape feeling only death would prove he was free. It is so him. Hermione's desperation to save him was depicted so well as I imagine many people in that situation feel that same sense of anger and desperation.
| Silverthreads chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Most intriguing little tale.
| duj chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Still a slave,
Till he lies
In his grave,
Is his burden,
His longed-for guerdon.
| Arre-Kate chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
aw... its sad. that comment at the end was deep. i liked it, though i usually like happyor fun stories more. oh well guess achange is as good as a holiday. keep writing, Lady Arre
| breannatala chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
I really like this. Well written and good idea.
| Jai iaJ chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
i like this one alot
| magicmistress1970 chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
It is a very well written piece of fiction. And the subject matter reminds me of a poem I first read when I was 15, over 20 yrs ago. I don't know who wrote it but it seems to fit.
Razors pain you,
Drugs cause cramps,
Acid stains you
Water is damp.
Guns aren't lawful,
Gas smells awful,
You might as well Live.
| AllCatsAreGrey88 chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
I think that you wrote this story brilliantly. I couldn't stop reading it. Your style of writing is very original and I like that, it's great to read something different every now and then. As for the ending, I think that it fits the story perfectly. This is a fantastic little story. Well done!
| Possum132 chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Strange and compelling. And not romantic, thank god.