Reviews for The Outcast Life
LL chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
The plot certainly seems interesting, but if I were you, I'd definitely invest some time to correct the abysmal grammar. Also, smileys (i.e. O.O) should never be used in a story's text (unless it's in a letter, text message, etc.).
Loner Kid chapter 7 . 10/1/2014
it's a little confusing, but still interesting :)
Loner Kid chapter 5 . 10/1/2014
naruto can use genjutsu!?
Loner Kid chapter 4 . 10/1/2014
Loner Kid chapter 3 . 10/1/2014 something happening that I didn't catch on? Why doesn't kakashi and sarutobi know who naruto is? Had he gone farrrr into the past? And why is Obito alive? Am I missing something?
Loner Kid chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
wait...why are things different? And why doesn't the medic lady hate naruto for kyuubi?
minhthu12-Present chapter 8 . 9/25/2014
l always loved this story and I have no clue why but I like it when those time travel stories that aren't so serious some times. But I do still like those serious types.
mariexmarieclosedaccount chapter 5 . 11/9/2013
I love your sense of humor... Thank you for writing this.
YugiKitten chapter 8 . 7/14/2013
LOL yeah i cant wait for everything to go down pff
Poor Naruto
Crazed King chapter 8 . 11/26/2012
magykalheart chapter 8 . 11/26/2011
cool story D
Kanrei chapter 7 . 7/14/2011
the ending is nice and warm. nice fic
MatsumotoXD chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Sasuke started. "He was born with no parents."


I think that's not physically POSSIBLE. Even virgin Mary with all her saintly immaculate conception was a parent.

And also, I would advise using less abbreviations OMG, WTF,... and more proper grammar. We don't want this to turn out bad, do we?
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I've read this maaaaan I gotta remember to review more :P
Peridotix chapter 7 . 8/3/2010
It's funny but there's no fucking plot.
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