Reviews for Steal My Breath Away
danny chapter 6 . 5/1/2012
i cant belive i read that...but i loved it! wow dark x dai is my favorite couple (fan girl scream) im such a nerd
Luthien chapter 7 . 5/22/2010
Hey I just wanted to stop by and say I really enjoyed this story. You captured the characters so well and gave them a beautiful relationship. I hope you either continue with this story or write another one of Dark and Daisuke. Keep up the good work and enjoy writing!
Brittany chapter 6 . 11/1/2009
That was like the best fanfiction I have read! *squeals* I mean who can't love this awesome paring XD and you wrote it so well and they were so cute and I mean come on! It's so good and I loved the lemon at the end! . I know I'm a perv, but o well! Anyways it's sad that you ended it, but I definitely understand the reason *nod* I can't tell you how many stories I haven't finished -.-' So ya! Keep up the good work!

Peace,

Brittany
FlyingTackle chapter 7 . 6/25/2009
I get it.

I really was liking the idea of the story but can see how you thought of it as too rushed.

But I've abandoned stories of my own, so don't feel bad.

Ha. Even if I am telling you this three years later.
FlyingTackle chapter 5 . 6/25/2009
Huh, I thought the Harada twins were kinda OOC, what with their unrelenting death-grip on Daisuke. Risa, maybe, but Riku doesn't really act like that.

Regardless, I love DarkDai and can get over the girls' OOC-ness since they're not really important to the story anyway.
SoSad chapter 7 . 2/13/2009
i hope ypu start again soon then...its REALLY good..
SomethingFishii chapter 2 . 2/4/2009
Hey, isn't it WIZ and not WITH or are you following the anime? I can't tell anymore. *sigh* Anyway, lovely story so far I really like it. Keep writing!
Ember Shadows chapter 7 . 8/11/2008
I think you did just fine on this FanFic. Don't worry; I feel the same way about most of my stories that I write. But you know what? When you feel you could've done better, that proves that you've improved since you've written it, and you'll continue to get better. Good luck! :)
Nightly Halo chapter 3 . 8/9/2008
aww...this is getting good!

I can't even imagine going to bed at 2am to get up at 6 T_T

my natural hours are going to bed at 2am-ish and waking up at 1pm

lol, i'm like...naturally nocturnal...so it's a pain in the ass when school starts T_T" it's like...the equivalent of a normal person having to stay up all night and getting little sleep in the day time
Nightly Halo chapter 2 . 8/9/2008
O

Plot twist! lol
Nightly Halo chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
this is my first Dark/Dai pairing story 3

I love it so far! your summary drew me in D
Alex468 chapter 3 . 6/17/2008
This Is My Secont Time Reading This Story And Wiz/With Says "Kyuu" Not "Chu"
Alex468 chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
I Know I Feel Your Pain
IceK7-1 chapter 7 . 4/10/2008
Well, what you completed was pretty good. But, I know how it feels to have an idea that doesn't really want to unfold once it hits the paper.
IceK7-1 chapter 3 . 4/10/2008
I'm not a big yaoi fan, because a lot of times the characters used are just too "straight" for it to work. But, oddly, I can see some homosexual beavior between these two. It just sort of... work. Anyway, I'll review again when I'm actually done with the story.
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