Reviews for Breathe Too Deep
Terin chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
Very moving.
hey-torch chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
it wasn't much...

only one of the most freakin awesome stories i've ever read! i'd like to describe it with better details and specifics, but right now i'm still reeling with the after effect of it. so i end up sounding kind of cliched when all i can say is:

That was awesome!
KBecks87 chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
that made me cry. it was so good and well written, and i am in awe of you.
hpfreaks2004 chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
fufulupin chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Damn. You are one hell of a writer.

I don't get chills over fanfiction. I don't get hit very hard. And I definately do not cry. Yet, somehow, your story, evoked all three unfamiliarities in me. You definately deserve credit for that. Keep up the amazing work.
siauthor chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
oh my god! that was beautiful! details and thoughts were so emotional and strong! wow...
tinkahbellz chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Oh my God.

That was...that was...

Oh my God.

I don't think words can capture how moving that was. I swear, I will never forget this. So affecting, breath-taking, gripping, deep, emotional, powerful, thriving...

This is going on my Fav list, without a doubt. I'll be dreaming about this all night. I don't think my weak 13-year-old mind was able to take it all in at once...

Cthulhu On Rye chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
This was...well it was powerful. Beautiful, tear-jerking and just...You asked in the end if it was worth it. I'm here to tell you that yeah, yeah it was.
LoverFaery chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
That WAS painful. (There were actualy wheezy sounds in my throat while I cried.) But it was beautifully painful. Life goes on...
Misfit Writer chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Wow...that was amazing. I loved all of it. It was so sweet, and powerful...and just awesome.
ephemereal chapter 1 . 1/4/2006

That was really and truly amazing. I can honestly say it's one of the best Rent fanfics I've ever read, and that's over the course of nearly five years.

I love your ability to capture emotion and describe it without using any of the typical words. Just brilliant.

Thank you for writing this.
the-fraulein chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
That was beautiful. I got a bit teary eyed, and believe me when I say that reading fanfiction is not something that typically would bring me to tears. Your use of the language is amazing, even the simpliest descriptions have this subtle beauty that clings once you've stopped reading. Just amazing. Wonderful work on this and I hope for more from you elsewhere. :)