Reviews for Untitled
KykyGhibli chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Ooohhh, I like where this is going.
Potato Queenie chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
Could you make your opening lines any more angstily melodramatic?
Please don't use the word "smirk" ever again. And I think you missed the point of what L'il Slugger is.
Teal8888 chapter 7 . 4/17/2013
i don't know what to say very well written
Guest chapter 7 . 1/27/2013
I think Jordan's a little slut and a bitch. Maniwa didn't deserve that treatment from the slutty little whore! He should never have shot himself over some silly little child like her! She deserved death. I only wish Maniwa's bullet HADN'T missed! Should've got her in the head! Little slag!
ParanoidInsanity chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
I keep coming back to this story. Actually, it makes me want to write my own. Expect a Lil Slugger X OC story real soon!
Ginkyofu13 chapter 7 . 8/14/2010
Man, that story is something, it shows some drama and shows some detail. It was the best one so far! THe best one!
Sakujoed chapter 7 . 9/9/2008
OMG. I loved it, great story. ]
shinoyami chapter 7 . 6/6/2008
ah...omg that was an awesome story. First lil slugger fic I've read here - I loved the drama! sheer awesomeness.
Gr33nJ3w3lRain chapter 7 . 6/6/2008
so she killed herself? well that is a bit depressing. but congrads on taking about 2 and a half yrs to complete this story :) haha muy bien mi hermana
Gr33nJ3w3lRain chapter 6 . 6/6/2008
in ch 4 you had him say he felt dumbness, but i thik you meant numbness.
XxMadara's-Little-StalkerxX chapter 2 . 5/15/2008
its good, although im confused whos POV this is.
7BlackCat13 chapter 6 . 2/17/2008
is she going to get to see li again?

and if so... does he find out about what she did with whats his face? does she tell him that she was pretending it was him the entire time? oh please god update soon!

D:

D:

BlackCat
DeviousxXxSmile chapter 6 . 11/28/2007
Wowzers! O_O

Please update soon! I wonder why I didn't read this sooner...

I really like how you characterized Lil' slugger. I think it's quite accurate! _
Phoenex360 chapter 6 . 8/30/2007
Aw... so cute! Not really sad... or angsty. More like... drama. *nods* But i still loves it! Update... as soon as you can!

360
streetrat245 chapter 6 . 8/3/2007
wow
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