|Reviews for Untitled|
| Kakakashi girl 15 chapter 6 . 3/25/2007
I have an idea of what might happen, but it's at a crossroads right now so please post the chappie soon._
P.s, that last chapter was beautiful, I wouldn't have blamed or flamed you for basicly ending the story right there, but come on, getting kinky with Maniwa? That seems very OOC for your OC.
| jdouglas17 chapter 6 . 3/25/2007
I love your story! this is one of my favorite shows. keep up the good work!
| Radical Hartless chapter 6 . 3/22/2007
...I hate cussing, please forgive...but...
WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE?
What are you doing to Li-
(Looks around madly) I-I-I m-mean Lil' Sl-Slugger? I LOVE his ad Jordan's relationship and now you're RUINING MY MENTAL STATUS! I HATE...
I HATE MANIWA!
...harumph. An if ya kill Lil' Slugger make him come back and kill ALL people who oppose him and his loved...Like what I did for Boy Bitched Bat...
Speaking of which...
if you're interested in my precious PA fic, know that it is on hold due to losing my new chapters...*sob*...
I HATE MANIWA AND IKARI!
PS: 'See you in hell'...
*Sigh* I luff Li-
(Looks around, but misses the bat aiming at her head) I-I-i mean Lil' Sl-Slugger...
RH: Ugh...I'll beh back...
| Rose Lillian Marshall chapter 6 . 3/19/2007
An absolutely beautiful story. But I have to question and I'm not flaming you. I don't like to flame. Why did Jordan have sexual relations with Maniwa? How old is she and how old is he? He's got to be at least 22-24 years old. I'm just asking, but anyways, great story.
| Tegan chapter 6 . 3/18/2007
PLEASE COUNTINUE! I have loved this story ever since the 1st chapter *nods* I have you only my favorite story alert list
| iiceangel3.o chapter 6 . 3/18/2007
o_O OMG! Theres only one more chapter left after this? WOW! lol his was sure a twist and I didnt see that coming xD It was a great chapter tho! I cant wait til the next one! D
| iiceangel3.o chapter 5 . 2/26/2007
Aw THIS IS THE MOST AWESOME STORY IN PA EVER!
| Mrs.MonkeyD.Hitachiinx3 chapter 5 . 1/13/2007
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Identity chapter 5 . 1/7/2007
so damn good. a bit [a lot] oocing, but damnit! the way you do it is so fucking awsome.
| Broken-noitcelfeR chapter 5 . 12/1/2006
loved this story.
can't wait to read the next chapters!
| Tegan.Sensei chapter 5 . 11/27/2006
I LOVE THIS! so sad though ;_; you are on my top 5 favortie writters on you know _ no kidding I promise! Hope you countinue soon! but take your time! even if its a year i'll wait
| Gr33nJ3w3lRain chapter 5 . 11/26/2006
WOAH! suprise ending to the chapter.
| alexcbh chapter 5 . 11/24/2006
| Gr33nJ3w3lRain chapter 4 . 11/22/2006
wow, this is so good. I kind of looked over it before, but now really reading it...i think it's so good. update when u can ;-)
| Sydal chapter 4 . 10/7/2006
It's so beautiful I've always loved lil' slugger. Soetimes I read these stories and pretend I'm the main chracter. Hee hee!