Reviews for Locard's Theory
Grisslybear chapter 2 . 3/26/2006
What a beautiful and sad story...I can't believe I haven't seen your work before. Really unique.
Little Green Tree chapter 2 . 1/7/2006
I just... plain love this story. It's very beautiful. :)
Nalana chapter 2 . 1/5/2006
Wow! I really enjoyed this! (Or enjoy? Is there more? Hmm? ;) ) Very intresting toggling of time!
Anushka chapter 2 . 1/5/2006
I really like your writing style. It's unique and it has kept me captivated.
M2S chapter 2 . 1/4/2006
you have effectively captured the tilt and whirl of Grissom's emotions. I especially love the description of the team pancake breakfast and Grissom's snag of Sara's pancakes.

It's not so much a story as a set of images, snagged from Gil's stream of consciousness.
Little Webby chapter 2 . 1/4/2006
I love it, I really do. You capture each moment perfectly and, wow, I'm lost for words. Top stuff! I would constructively criticize, but I really can't find a flaw.

Little Webby :-)
Sunset chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Vivid imagery, beautifully written. Well done.