Reviews for Bleeding inside
Prieda Solo chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
which character is this? From the content of your other stories I'm guessing its our Sev again.

the rhyme and rhythm is very good (although perhaps a little to twee at times) and some of the imagery is beautiful.

I particularly like the effect generated by the shorter line 'Is it so much better there?' both as a question and a shorter line it stands out and it says a lot about the character (esp if it is Sev. Because in that case its a heart-wrenching death wish but in a sort of whistful way).
Evil by Definition chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
wow I love it
My Sharpie Is Green chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Another beautiful piece!
Leta McGotor chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
To make it short: Yes, I like it. But there is a question nagging at me: Who is the man with these thoughts? Do you have a character on your mind or do you write it without? But nevertheless I like it very much.
TheKookaburraStoleMySausage chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Hello friend,

That was excellent rhyming technique. But i'm not sure poems are the most popular choice on fanfic. But keep up the good work ... good sentence structure too...