|Reviews for Bleeding inside|
| Prieda Solo chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
which character is this? From the content of your other stories I'm guessing its our Sev again.
the rhyme and rhythm is very good (although perhaps a little to twee at times) and some of the imagery is beautiful.
I particularly like the effect generated by the shorter line 'Is it so much better there?' both as a question and a shorter line it stands out and it says a lot about the character (esp if it is Sev. Because in that case its a heart-wrenching death wish but in a sort of whistful way).
| Evil by Definition chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
wow I love it
| My Sharpie Is Green chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Another beautiful piece!
| Leta McGotor chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
To make it short: Yes, I like it. But there is a question nagging at me: Who is the man with these thoughts? Do you have a character on your mind or do you write it without? But nevertheless I like it very much.
| TheKookaburraStoleMySausage chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
That was excellent rhyming technique. But i'm not sure poems are the most popular choice on fanfic. But keep up the good work ... good sentence structure too...