|Reviews for Break|
| irishais chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
God, Rin is a creepy dude, isn't he? I never really gave him much thought, but now that you've said that...
Anyway, I love this; it's a great mix of humor and a little bit of something darker underneath the surface. Well played!
| Holme's assitant chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
lol love this story!
| Nith-Einon chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
You have captured both characters perfectly. Very nicely done -
| owlmoose chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
"...Nooj's gaze flickers up in a gesture that speaks volumes, as all his gestures do."
This is an excellent line!
Really this is all very good, you've captured both Rin and Nooj quite elegantly in just a few words, and even the throwaways about Gippal are just right. You seem to have a strong sense of all these characters, both their words and their actions. A nice little piece overall.
| Ikonopeiston chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
What a delightful discovery! I enjoyed this very much. You are post-modern in your style and elegant in your language. You do Lucas honour with this story. Bravo!