|Reviews for Becoming Neville|
| ArmedWithMyComputer chapter 34 . 2/19
I absolutely loved this, stayed up half the night reading it! Fantastic job with this story - I'm still reeling from how amazing it is. Thanks for posting :)
| DollyDolly123 chapter 34 . 1/21
Love the story! It's so cute! I'd love it if you wrote a sequel or even a oneshot epilogue! Maybe explore Lorien more as a character or introduce harry to mr and mrs longbottem? Xx just something to think about
| draconin chapter 34 . 1/11
What a beautiful story! Outstanding balance between the characters and I love Dr Chatterjee! I would have liked to see Lorien developed more but I can see that she served the purpose she was needed for.
| Hunchbook chapter 34 . 1/9
OMG this is just so... so... guh!
I love Lupin stories and Neville stories and this was absolutely wonderful! You captured everyone so perfectly, Neville's Gran was a particular delight. I also kind of really want to know what happened that night Snape and Lupin got drunk, but that's neither here nor there. Also Snape's scene in the hospital with Lupin when he's using particular and practiced sighs had me giggling like mad.
Most excellent. Thank you.
| AnacDian chapter 34 . 1/9
Well Done. Neville is one of my favs. He can be built up in different ways, but it's almost always the path of self-discovery and of the unassuming hero. For a while there I thought you might have been angling for some slash between HP/NL or RL/SS. That could have worked as both Harry & Neville are both stunted socially and would develop together or both Remus and Snape are world weary survivors and could really appreciate someone to lean on that has been were they have. Of course, those are also good basises for friendships as well. You could certainly continue this if you have a mind to do so. Anyway, thanks for writing. Anac
| Liz the Reader chapter 34 . 12/29/2013
TOO MANY FEELS
| mystiri chapter 34 . 12/28/2013
This is an amazing story, well-written with great character development. I love the way Snape is portrayed, and the hints that he has a sense of humour, the friendship between him and Lupin, the Hogwarts betting pools, and now I really wonder what else all those Hufflepuffs get up to, because it looks like everybody else underestimates them a lot. And Neville is wonderful, in the way he slowly gains confidence, in how he learns to look at things differently, and in the way he brings a very different approach to being a hero that is less about strength, and more about willingness to care. Thank you for a great read.
| Hoodie Hugger chapter 34 . 12/22/2013
This was a great story. We stayed up a little past our bedtime to finish it. In a way, I wish you had shown whether Neville's parents recover under Dr. Chatterjee, but on the other hand it's better to leave it open. Thanks for writing.
| Hoodie Hugger chapter 23 . 12/22/2013
I KNEW Driftwood was up to no good! Keep the chapters coming!
| Hoodie Hugger chapter 15 . 12/22/2013
It was nice to see Severus being almost nice to Neville for a change. I'm suspicious about Harry's behaviour here, though. I can't tell if it's hating Snape, influence of Horcrux, being a teenager, or a combination thereof.
| Hoodie Hugger chapter 14 . 12/22/2013
Go Neville! I liked the mental struggles in this chapter.
| Hoodie Hugger chapter 4 . 12/22/2013
The hospital scene made me feel a bit awful, like I've invaded on their privacy by reading about it. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| mistrali chapter 34 . 11/22/2013
Oh, my, but this was an emotional rollercoaster. Beautifully done.
| Psychedelica chapter 34 . 11/6/2013
Oh. Oh wow. This fic left me practically speechless. I was worried it was all going to end up happy-smiley-kittens-and-rainbows, but I was very pleased with the ending you chose :) Definitely one of my favourite, if not my iabsolute/i favourite, Neville fic around.
| tigersmeleth chapter 34 . 10/27/2013
Well written! I like the way you've written Neville, and thanks for the ride!