|Reviews for Becoming Neville|
| Caddi chapter 1 . 6/20
sniff, read this again. I love how you fleshed out everyones personalities! beautifully written
| Janie.ohio chapter 34 . 5/29
I loved seeing everyone's behaviors and attitudes from Neville's perspective. very well done. thank you.
| Willow chapter 34 . 4/7
I loved this so much it's so perfect ah
| Echo864 chapter 34 . 3/26
An absolutely beautiful story! I kind of wish Harry wasn't such an immature prat at times but I suppose he's only 15, which is about right I guess. Plus the main focus is Neville anyway. Would LOVE an epilogue! But even if it never appears that was a pretty perfect ending. The Lupin-Snape friendship was really interesting to read about too, I don't think I've ever seen that before in a fic. Super cool! :)
| Annoyed chapter 1 . 3/10
You can’t stop there!
*whiny baby mode*
I want to read more!
| SaiyaCat chapter 34 . 2/20
| maya chapter 34 . 2/5
wanna more, please?:)
seriously, I loved the story, thank you!
| arctic-kat chapter 34 . 1/13
this story is amazing! such a great plot I love all your characters. Please write another one with Neville sometime 3
| Honestly don't you two read chapter 34 . 12/9/2017
So sweet :-) I like that your focus is on Neville :-) good job!
| Guest chapter 34 . 12/3/2017
Not quite sure about that ending, but brilliant story. It's nice to see Neville as a developing individual. His mental & emotional growth this summer was incredible. This is going into my favorite collection.
| Guest chapter 23 . 12/3/2017
Harry is acting like a spoiled brat. Someone should point out he's acting just like Dudley. Or stand him in a corner the same way one would punish a child. Great story!
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/2/2017
How could Neville be 23 months old? Harry was 15 months on 10-31-81, and Neville is only one day older. The Longbottoms were tortured within a week after the Potters died. Do the math. Interesting plot but your timeline is off. Neville is blossoming nicely.
| Mintley8 chapter 34 . 11/11/2017
*sniff* How... perfect.. Thank you so much x
| snazzieshazzie chapter 34 . 11/3/2017
Oh absolutely amazing read. heartbreaking but sweet
| Guest chapter 34 . 10/2/2017
oh this was a fantastic read!