|Reviews for Of all the Rotten Luck|
| XxaoshixX chapter 8 . 12/14/2006
| randomteenager chapter 9 . 12/13/2006
woah that was...err.."interesting"
haha i liked how you put "now back to to the lemon you pervs" that made me laugh
| Ur2tRoUbLeSoMe90 chapter 9 . 12/13/2006
*point of view of perverted audience* NO! DON'T STOP WRITING LEMONS! THIS CHAPTER WAS AWESOME! *end of p.o.v.* _ so what flavor was it at the end? lol. update soon please!
| 10ve chapter 9 . 12/13/2006
you sholdn't stop writing lemons. please update soon...
| harunosakua chapter 9 . 12/13/2006
| Blizzie-chan chapter 9 . 12/13/2006
I know I'm evil aren't I. Cuz I'm such a lazy ass, I never review. Blah. Well, since I'm reminded to review, I'll review. :D Yes, I forget ALOT or...say all the time. Hehe... Too much into a story can do that to a person. Don't worry. Happens to me all the time - what I just said and when people alert but DON'T REVIEW. You'd think I'd be sympathetic about something similar to my situation, but no. I just read. I'm so mean. So anyway, I hope you forgive my evil-no-reviewing-person-for-the-past-updated-chapters self with this forgiving-YES-reviewing-person-that-hasn't-exactly-reviewed-the-last-updated-chapters review.
By the way, I love your story. It's very hard these days to find a decent fanfic once you've read a bazillion other decent fanfics. :D
| withloveagain chapter 9 . 12/13/2006
your story gives me chills . hahaha ew i feel like such a perv xD haaha update soon please }
| Sekiryu chapter 8 . 12/11/2006
You already updated – tones of it too! The Angel and Demon fic sounds good. You're right about the highschool fics – I went on a spree of it once, and let's just say I've not been able to look at the title, much less read anymore highschool fics. You could do something else, how about a psychiatrist and patient? A master and a slave? Err...forget them, they sound too dark and angsty I have an affinity towards dark and angsty fics. Anyway...you're doing fine! More than fine. I liked the dialogues and other stuff in the stories – pure concentrated lemons in a fic are a turn off and an eyesore (no offense to anybody in particular), lemons are much more agreeable in small quantities, scattered and inserted a little here and there. It's like between drinking a nice glass of lemonade and a half glass of concentrated lemon puree – which one would you rather have? Does that even make sense to you? Am I ranting? Because I'm sure I sound like I am. Because it's 4am and I couldn't sleep and I have to go work at 8 and I'm hungry but I'm too lazy to get my ass off this chair in front of the comp to get something to eat and where was I again? Oh yeah...Sasuke's not very subtle is he? Hm, would Sakura comply? Maybe I'll stop here. Ja na. Oh...btw, I like your sense of humour – wicked ;D
| harunosakua chapter 8 . 12/3/2006
SO HES JUST GOING 2 ASK HER IF SHE WANTS 2 HAVE SEX?
| MistressBlossom chapter 8 . 11/30/2006
that was a little direct...
lol UPDATE SOON!
| withloveagain chapter 8 . 11/29/2006
I LOVE YOUR STORY lol love it love it love...but i can't belive you ended it with that sentence XD
| Jenny F chapter 8 . 11/29/2006
LMAO!Wow so romantic Sasuke "lets have sex"
ok ok...OMG ITS THE APOCALYPSE!Veggies are evil...cept TOmatoes,Corn...and Bananas
kk UPDATE SOON!WHE
| vanillove chapter 8 . 11/27/2006
LMAO XD lets have sex GAHAHA XD wow menn wells great ficcy soo farr
| UchihaFairy chapter 8 . 11/27/2006
i like it
| ninjaxbunny chapter 8 . 11/27/2006
LMFAO! hahah, i was cracking up through this whole chapter that i thought i would die from lack of oxygen! x] it's so freakin' funny. sasuke's last line...yeah xD