|Reviews for Looking for Magic|
| rinny08 chapter 18 . 2/7/2006
hm, this long fingered man hermione is invisioning wouldn't happen to have given her his hankerchief, now would he? ;-)
i was absolutely thrilled when you said this story was going to be longer than 60 chapters. i need a good long story to latch on to right now, as the last long one i was reading (Of Debts and Debt Collection...good story, i reccomend it if you haven't read it) is ending in a chapter or so.
| lady-rhian chapter 18 . 2/7/2006
Wonderful! Lots of insight here - the progression of Hermione's now-adult status, the eventual relationship with Severus, and the closure of her spiritual issues all fit in tightly and nicely here. The part about vibrators was particularly inspired, if I do say so myself. You really delved into Hermione in this chapter; her experiences actually came to have emotional connection & content ... very well done. :)
| princesssfiona chapter 18 . 2/7/2006
Great chapter. It was good to see how Hermione has become an adult and realised that her parents death wasn't her fault.
Looking forwared to the next installment.
| duj chapter 18 . 2/7/2006
Long fingers and a non-fiction library; who could that possibly be?
| Aldara chapter 17 . 2/5/2006
Nice chapter, Snape is very good at consoling Hermione. _
You know, for a moment when Hermione explained about her "deal with God" and how to better deal with Ron and Harry, she sounded very American to me. I'm German and spending a year as an au-pair in the US, everything American kinda jumps into my face right now... *g*
| rinny08 chapter 17 . 2/2/2006
this story is fabulous! i like that you don't have snape and hermione just falling into bed like a lot of the others stories do, this is more natural.
please update soon
| Bjornsdotter chapter 17 . 2/1/2006
A very insightful moment with Snape; and will probably be the very begining for the two of them towards a relationship down the road. It always the little things that seem to matter the most. As always looking forward to the next chapter.
| Bjornsdotter chapter 16 . 2/1/2006
O...a cliffhanger, how deliciously evil! I love it!
| duj chapter 17 . 2/1/2006
Nice chapter though your Snape muist have been drinking a Congeniality Potion or something.
| Gemini969 chapter 17 . 1/31/2006
A great story so far my friend! Update as soon as you are able to!
| Bjornsdotter chapter 14 . 1/31/2006
Amazing, your writing is just amazing. You should consider writing an original story. You definetly have talent...I'm not just saying that, I read all of the time and have thousands of books all over my house. You have what it takes to be an author.
| Bjornsdotter chapter 13 . 1/31/2006
Sad chapter, but well written. Luckily Hermione has an excellent support system to help her through the hard times. I especially liked Draco's reaction. Many times a gesture, from someone unexpected, can mean so much to a person.
Now on to the next few chapters...unfortunately real life interupted my reading, fortunately I now have a few to read.
| Paprika chapter 17 . 1/31/2006
This is a great story, i look forward to the upcoming chapters.
| Edania chapter 17 . 1/31/2006
very real indeed. Loving it!
| PheonixFlight chapter 17 . 1/31/2006
Excelent chapter, it's good to see interaction between Severus and Hermione, I thought the dialog was very well written and flowed quite naturally. You really made me feel Hermione's emotions, very evocative, well done! Looking forward to the next chapter.