|Reviews for The Cold Room|
| 1234567890 chapter 7 . 9/4/2013
I really like your story and if you like it keep it the way it is. If the readers don't like it they can read a different story. Don't change what you like just because other people don't like it. And again great story!
| BrightPetal91 chapter 20 . 2/14/2013
Awesome story. Make sure you proofread your work, there were a lot of mistakes.
| Brittany chapter 20 . 11/24/2012
Power to the adopted people! I am the oldest of five adopted kids and so I enjoy hearing about other people being adopted. The story was really good
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/13/2012
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| Guest chapter 5 . 8/13/2012
that's cool, pleasedonothavebloodwards
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| Guest chapter 3 . 7/1/2012
The defendo spell is a cuttind spell
| Ruby101 chapter 3 . 4/17/2012
Excellent story so far. Just wanted to point out, the Expelliarmus Charm disarms your opponent, a wizards weapon is usually his wand, meaning that this charm will make the wand fly out of your opponents hand. This is more or less the same spell as the one you made up.
Apart from that, very good.
| kat chapter 14 . 4/9/2012
"Ron and Hermione looked at each other and then to the doors Hermione had disapeared through." What? Please proof read your work before submitting it online.
| kat chapter 11 . 4/9/2012
Grrr... too many holes in your story.. How could James have scored the winning goal if he was the keeper. The match was supposed to be against Hufflepuff not Ravenclaw.