Reviews for Naruto: Hyūga Prilgrimage
Darklordcomp chapter 6 . 4/25/2014
kakashi you magnificent bastard
Ayrmed chapter 9 . 12/27/2013
Awesome story!
NaruHinaUntilTheEnd chapter 9 . 6/21/2013
InflatedChimp chapter 2 . 3/15/2013
In regards to the Hyūga vs Hyuuga both are correct. Though Hyūga may be slightly more correct. The 'uu' in Hyuuga is just another way of displaying the 'ū' in Hyūga.
So far I'm liking this story, it is a nice lighthearted change from what I've grown used to recently. :)
Amer Leon chapter 9 . 1/12/2013
loved the story and the whole setting idea of the pilgrimage. great writing style and storytelling talent that you have shown here. i do think that the ending left a lot hanging...naruto and hinata never had an in depth talk that would give them a chance to get to know each other. like some other stories you kept them apart...which caused hinata to never get to speak her mind to naruto. i
think you will carry that tactic into the sequel also...but i would love to read it. i hope that i can find the sequel...and i will search. this is especially cool since not naruto and hinata are together in the 'official story', the manga, thanks for writing.
Amer Leon chapter 8 . 1/11/2013
great, great chapter! excellent fights...i think you have done a super job with the characters. i do wonder why you don't have hinata take the jonin exam with naruto? (i like it when she is not portrayed as super weak.) that would be pretty cool...maybe you just want to keep the tension going for hinata though? do you have a sequel up? i will check again...this is a great one.
Amer Leon chapter 7 . 1/11/2013
great romantic chapter. i thought the writing and pacing of the scenes in the chap were just great. I loved it! hinata finally got her wish!
Amer Leon chapter 6 . 1/11/2013
another great naruhina chapter. i loved the action and suspense but also the romantic moments here for naruto and hinata. there are some unexpected plot twists that keep the story exciting.
Amer Leon chapter 5 . 1/11/2013
this chapter was a cool roller coaster ride for our two wonderful characters...great writing Geor-sama. I love naruhina only naruto stories...i have always felt...since i saw hinata look at naruto in the first anime...that they were meant for each other. and now in the manga...they are! I will check your profile when i get done with this one to see if you have more great naruhina stories.
Amer Leon chapter 4 . 1/11/2013
your a/n says something is lacking in this chap...but i can't see it! this is an emotional chapter that takes the reader from the despair that hinata is feeling and the confusion that naruto is experiencing to the very hopeful ending. i just think that it is a super part of the romance that you are writing here:)
Amer Leon chapter 3 . 1/10/2013
great chapter...action, tension, and romance to boot! this is just a wonderful naruhina story so far. superb writing.
Amer Leon chapter 2 . 1/10/2013
great chapter...i'm enjoying the japanese type feel to the whole pilgrimage. i am so glad that you are focused on naruto and hinata and not everyone else...most stories...even ones that call themselves naruhina the most spend a forth of the story on them. now with the manga ch 613-615...naruto and hinata are finally getting some time together.
Amer Leon chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
this was a great and fun first chapter. it was just cool the way you show naruto and hinata. naruto with his enthusiasm and kind of dense but energetic way of doing everything...and the shy but beautiful and 'very much in love' hinata:) this lookd like a great story.
rippyfarten chapter 3 . 12/10/2012
fanfic sucks donkey dong
Guest chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
"Just one of the many super abilities that Konoha's future greatest Ho-Ho...ho-o...ooooooh..." he mumbled as his telescope snapped to the hot bath's where he had just caught Hinata -by pure chance and accident- slowly lowering herself into the steaming water.

"Ooooooh my..." Gulping he lowered the telescope, licking his lips nervously. "There's nothing wrong with appreciating a girl..." the blond in question started to raise the telescope but paused shaking his head.

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