|Reviews for Fade Into Nothing|
| anyabar1987 chapter 3 . 3/27/2007
oo could you write more. is ray bray?
| Tortall Tribe Freak chapter 3 . 12/7/2006
plz i love this story so much
| tribebohemian chapter 3 . 3/15/2006
this is an excellent chapter. i already like kara and her brother. there's something very human about their interactions with "ray" and each other. i like the dialogue, it doesn't feel forced. and it was also a good, clean cut explanation about the technos. gives us location and reasoning and even a bit of timing. i really enjoyed the name game. i especially loved that you didn't have kara just guess Bray's name. it's not a usual name. slade's appearance and the name of his father... that was an ingeniuous moment. just those ferw sentences between them and her casual way of giving "ray" his name. the whole was just really well done, well thought out and put together beautifully. keep it up. you've got me hooked
| MR. SE7EN chapter 3 . 3/3/2006
that was hot are the mallrats going to find him ?
| tribebohemian chapter 2 . 2/16/2006
AUGH! why such a short chapter? are you trying to kill me? i'm already hooked and i wanna know what happens! ok now that my tantrum is done, i love the update. so far i feel this a realistic depiction of one who's lost his memory. the thoughts in his mind. wow...it just dawned on me that this poor guy doesn't even remember there was a virus. or what the world was like. but there must be something left since he's only suffering mild amnesia and not full on retardation. and i mean that in the medical sense. he still knows how to speak, how to think. he knows concepts like city and country and all that jazz. sounds like they erased the more personal part of his memory and not the hardwired details that we learn from birth. pretty cool. keep it coming. and how bout 2 chapters next time! :)
| MR. SE7EN chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
BRAY NO, you have to make a sequal what happend to bray in this fic heck what happend to him in the show
| tribebohemian chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
interesting. i wanna say it's bray but that seems a bit too obvious so i wouldn't mind being wrong. i like surprises
| tabitha5 chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
great story! Going to love reading your version of what happened to bray! Can't wait for more.