|Reviews for After the Fall|
| JKaizer chapter 2 . 1/8/2006
Last line was humorous.
A tad more description would be nice, as you seem to center a lot on dialogue, and it gets slightly confusing to remember who is saying what.
Nice though, rock on girl
| NYCbabe chapter 2 . 1/8/2006
Love it. This is a great story.
| JKaizer chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
Ah, this deserves a review I'd think. :D
Very nicely written. You were right when you said that you can't catch JKR's voice, but you did a wonderful job of keeping them somewhat IC.
"Ron hadn't known that Harry had linked himself to Ginny; Hermione had told him later."
You really should explain what that's all about...
...Rufus? *thinks for a moment* He's so different from LotW's... XD I had to think a bit about him.
"At least, he didn't think that anything could reverse it."
That makes me think.
Rock on girl!