Reviews for Captain Neji and the Hidden Straits of Death
Ms.Ashiteru chapter 20 . 11/8/2007
ihave a question rerding acoupl that im confused with question is that if shikamaru and ino r going to be a couple or the dreaded shikamaru x temari going to be a couple please answer me soon i really want to know thank u very much.

Also i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THE STORY ITS SO CUTE AND AMAZING I ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE
KoolKittyKat256 chapter 20 . 11/2/2007
I L_O_V_E THIS STORY! IT ROCKS! UPDATE! UPDATE!
Terumiu chapter 20 . 10/14/2007
one of the better pirate stories about the naruto series i've keep it up.

ValkyrieX~
solfire chapter 20 . 10/4/2007
Hahaha, This is SUCH an awesome story! I love it! I totally feel your pain. I'm in IB too. Soul sucking program that it is. Lol, update soon if you can!
half-note chapter 20 . 10/4/2007
Great chapter! How Neji and Tenten just like sort of kissed. We've all had seen it coming, it was a matter of time. XD

I could perfectly imagine everything in my head, like some sort of movie. This could actually be a very interested movie if it were the case. XD

I'm ready for the (angsty) action packed chapters. The final resolution. God, I can't believe...it will end in 5 more chapters. D: Such a great story. (Anything involving you as the writer and Neji & Tenten as pirates, of course it had to be full of win.)

Now for the next chapter. Lol! Update soon. Aye! XD
Julissaway chapter 17 . 9/29/2007
Oh, please hurry and update. I just can't wait for the next chapter!
Hexxgirl chapter 20 . 9/26/2007
O.o; Took him long enough! Update soon please!
Hexxgirl chapter 17 . 9/26/2007
OMG! Neji wants porn! LOVE IT! funny bird, real funny bird.
Hexxgirl chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Hi Hi! I have read p to chapter four so far and i just had 2 say...OMFG THAT WAS AWSOME! I mean,i love how you write. I can feel like i am there. God I sound like a dork...XD But like i said, LOVE IT! Lol...banshee
engr4t300 chapter 20 . 9/17/2007
YES! nejiten scene!
Toboe LoneWolf chapter 20 . 9/15/2007
I am a bad, bad person. Been reading this since chapter one and never reviewed. I fail.

I have to say that you are like, The Genius at Naruto/Nejiten AUs. Seriously. Sure, it might be crack, but it contains so much sheer genius that it transcends crack. How in the world can it be crack if you've placed Naruto characters into a pirate AU so well that thinking they're really ninjas somehow becomes foreign? (No kidding.) And that you've done it with So Many characters is beyond belief. You've got Dan the parrot! How many AU fanfics have a Dan? XD

It's sad to think this lovely bit of Naruto "crack" will be over in five chapters, but so goes life. That I love the Nejiten bits goes without saying, but I also love how you've got Sakura's spunk and the adorable Gai-Lee interaction and how you've formed Tenten's pirate background - sheesh, Tenten's entire network within the pirate community is nothing short of genius either (Iruka the dolphin man FTW). Oh yeah, and The Hinata Punch. That rocked, so much.

Major love and etcetera; also, Greek mythology turned into pirate riddles FTW. You are made of awesome win; let nothing tell you otherwise. XP
Monito chapter 20 . 9/9/2007
how cute !

he's holding her hand
openwindow chapter 20 . 9/5/2007
XD that last scene was hot! i especially loved the descriptions - very vivid, as well as the plotline!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Dancer of the Wind chapter 20 . 9/3/2007
NO! WHADDAYA MEAN THIS IS TOO LONG FOR A WACK STORY?
Julissaway chapter 20 . 9/2/2007
I love this story! It's well written, and it's not dirty or overly decorated with cussing. It's just wonderful
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