Reviews for Nothing
Bronycuddlykittehs chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
It may be somthing new when you wrote this, but it still touching.

However, if he really deystroed this world as Dan, then he should feel no reproch. Did Dan abandon him in the wastlands of a fututre that never happens?

Sad.

Of course I will ruin this with a song fitting of this suitation.

...

Sort of.

its more uplifting in the same sort of problem.

"Dead air"
Amethyst DragonRider chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
I was wondering...

Are you still willing to take a oneshot idea?

'Cause I had a good idea...

Anyway. I thought it was interesting. n_n
Nicktendo Squad chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
Uh... It sucked?...
Rachel chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
um, I acualy kinda liked it
phantomshadowdragon chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
You'r right, it sucked. :) But someone liked it. I found this in someone's fav. stories list. :)
taylor chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
You should write how like danny cracks under pressure and creeps thruogh the streets killing all his love ones to protect them. And letting his enemys live to suffer in pain. But it is just an idea. take it or leave it.
Love Sucks chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
it was very emotional, it's not that bad.
Summers Rage chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
ok well this story did suck. BUT, i think i have an idea to help you fix it.

make it a multi chapter

start off the story either like this and do the rest of this story as a flashback. sam goes missing or something and they find each other years later and right after they confess their love sam is taken away from him and is killed.

ok well reading that over made me relieze how BAD it sounded but it's an idea not a very good one but an idea none the less (ok dorky thing it say)
Kuki Salazar chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
wow. just. wow. that was...there is no word in the whole freaking dictionary that can discribe how...touching (?, i cant find the word...) this is...wow...
ToriChan chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
That didn't suck at all! It was short deep and leaving no question for a sequel. Some people carry on, but that was good! _
Just call me crazy chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
It was a good shot. But... your right... I mean it was sad but there was little conection. You can't really feal without that... do you know what I'm saying?

Well I definatly think your on the right track but maybe writing sad storys isn't for you... but I can't say that full heartedly since this is the only one I think I've seen you wright... I mean... I can't write scary storys every time I try they turn out like... well you know... not verry good... so keep trying maby I'm rong I mean I was only right once... or atleast thats what I say...

Well good luck and bye for now!