Reviews for Lines in the Clouds
DJmiso chapter 11 . 12/15/2016
no. this story is perfect. i like the sesshoumaru you portray. he's sad, melancholy, different from the seas i am used to, but it's different and nice. and yer writing is very refreshing. makes me feel a little inferior with my writing, actually, but i guess everyone has their own writing styles.
Cyrish chapter 19 . 11/16/2016
Wait.. So Kagome dies? Is that what you meant by writing: "Kagome thought he was only talking about the war"? He was talking about her death, wasn't he? And is that also why you wrote: "His child" instead of "their child" coz she will soon die?

Shaish chapter 19 . 11/10/2016
I'm not crying your crying. fDSjkfls. Thank you very much for writing this. It's so beautiful. 3
Shaish chapter 15 . 11/10/2016
fdskfjdskfjsdl. I loveeee.
Shaish chapter 11 . 11/10/2016
I think it's interesting, and the progression is interesting.
Shaish chapter 9 . 11/10/2016
Oh man. That was eerie.
Shaish chapter 7 . 11/10/2016
This is interesting. I love how...mature? Kagome seems. Her and Inuyasha seem older, and that comes across really well. I love how you're writing Sesshoumaru too. He's still stiff and intimidating and calculating, but you've managed to fit in those moments where he's...LESS of that, and more brought down to their earthy level, rather than in the clouds where he seems to be most of the time. I like it. I loved seeing him interact with Kagome's family, too. XD 3
Shaish chapter 4 . 11/10/2016
Ahhhhhhhh. I'm tearing up. ;-;
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Salome Maranya chapter 19 . 8/29/2016
Beautiful. Thank you.
Last Breath chapter 5 . 8/21/2016
Right now I am listen to Symphony No. 9 ~ Beethoven and the way Sesshomaru felt to the library is how I feel towards books!
Last Breath chapter 3 . 8/21/2016
Why in every fan fiction I read Inukimi is dead! She is not dead at all in the show so don't have her die in the fan fiction!
Guest chapter 19 . 6/5/2016
This story really evoke emotions in me that I didn't expect. This is honestly one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. I loved it. You are a truly gifted writer.
Guest chapter 19 . 2/24/2016
so heartbreaking in its humanity and the truths that this brought out. I was quite literally in tears as I read this story. beautifully done!
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