Reviews for Veela Inheritance Problems
Earthwytch chapter 9 . 8/5/2006
Wow, wonderful story, I'm so glad you updated. I was only thinking about this story the other day and wishing you'd write more. I didn't think it could get any better but the rewritten earlier chapters are an improvement on perfection. It really is a fabulous story, different from any other veela one, please write more and soon. I love your good Malfoys and Snape and the twist in making Voldemort think Lucius is the spy. I hope Pansy doesn't do too much damage, I want a happy story, minimal angst with lots of comfort!
Daisydill chapter 9 . 8/5/2006
There was no Harry/Draco interaction, although I suppose it can't be in every chapter. The Severus and Lucius knowledge is great though. Nice to know that they're such good friends. And that Voldemort is so gullible. So much for being intelligent. And cunning. And sly. Exactly how did he get to be in SLytherin, Oh yeah, he used be all of those. I guess dying isn't good for the mental skills. Oh well. Good for everyone else.
yllom21 chapter 9 . 8/5/2006
Interesting chapter! This sure advances the plot. Nicely done and rather well written.
CalliM chapter 9 . 8/5/2006
I am so happy that you updated this story! It is one of my favorites. I really liked the part where Sirius is trying to get Harry to run away with him and Remus smacking him. The two can be such comic relief! I am looking forward to seeing more Draco & Harry interaction and the arrival of the dreaded chaperone...Mrs. Weasley. I can just see her complicating things now! Thank you so much.
AnnF chapter 9 . 8/5/2006
Yea, an update! Can't wait to see chaperone Molly. :) Will the Malfoys push to get Sirius cleared for Harry's sake?
Delete This Account You Wanker chapter 9 . 8/5/2006
Wonderful chapter! Cannot wait to read more!
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 9 . 8/5/2006
Looks like Harry is warming up to Draco afterall. I was hoping he'd fight a bit more... but nevermind. I still loved this chapter, please update as soon as possible.
rayama chapter 9 . 8/5/2006
Good chapter! so glad you're updating this fic. Though I would think that harry would at least consider ditching Draco.
Draco is my King chapter 8 . 8/5/2006
Please, if you have time, could you try to update this story? I like the cute frustration of Harry and the continued closeness between him and his friends and the Weasly family. Sometimes it is so depressing to read fics where his friends abandon him because of something he couldn't help. Friends like Ron and Hermione, in my opinion, would not so easily drop a friend like Harry.

Anyway, you write very well, despite a few minor spelling mistakes/typos (which are always impossible to catch unless you read your own work a bunch of times or have someone else do it!). All of your conversations between characters are easy to follow, and action is even easier to understand and imagine. You use emotion well; I noticed that even in the fighting scenes you did not overdo it, but used a great combination of description, emotion, and character interaction. As you can probably see, I really enjoyed your story. I find it harder and harder to find a newer fanfiction that is not poorly written or completely unoriginal. If I had the time and imagination (and less of a tendency to be blatantly distracted), I would hope my writing style would be as simple and well-done as yours!

Have a good day! And thanks for listening to my rambling!

-Draco is my King

(o.k.a Erin)
yllom21 chapter 8 . 8/3/2006
Cute story, lovely job! Different from other veela stories, although similar as well. I like the chaperone idea, I've never seen that before in another veela fic. Cute job and lovely story.
Zoomi chapter 8 . 7/30/2006
I loved how unlike normal Veela stories where they only had one true mate this fic had it so the strongest won. Very wicked. And how they aren't suppose to touch until the wedding? All I have to say is I can't wait to find out what tactics Draco will use to do just the opposite. I know you haven't updated in a long time almost six months, but I'm still going to hope you will eventually finish this fic. Update soon! :]
Sirius' Widow chapter 8 . 7/22/2006
I just re-read all your story... I REALLY like it!

Please write something soon... I cant wait to read it.

Greetings.
keisan chapter 8 . 7/19/2006
Relatively new fic eh? I really really like it. But then, there's something I like about your stories, well thought out, romantic, mischevious, dramatic and sweet. :) Can't wait to read your next update!

I love protective-Draco! :D
miz chapter 8 . 7/10/2006
Would definitely love to read more soon..!
Rhalkha chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
just great
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