Reviews for Veela Inheritance Problems
Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 9 . 6/5/2014
pissed off Voldy HAHA
Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 6 . 6/5/2014
yes the D.A.
Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 4 . 6/5/2014
haha
Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 3 . 6/5/2014
hehe
Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 2 . 6/5/2014
WOW
Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
great first chapter
HarryPotterforlife23 chapter 21 . 6/4/2014
Truly love this story. Love the fact harry is a fighter and the Weasleys (Ron) is being supportive. Will there be another chapter or a follow up story.
Very happy with the Draco character he seems to be snarky plus protective a perfect mix.
Please complete really looking forward to it.
recount chapter 7 . 5/29/2014
I tried.
recount chapter 6 . 5/29/2014
Mr. Ivanoff actually seemed pretty cool before he apparently gave off creeper vibes.
recount chapter 4 . 5/29/2014
Really don't like how Pansy is portrayed - she's a slut because she's had sex? And no mention of the guys she's been with being sluts because they had sex with her. Nope, it's only the girl. I mean, wow.
recount chapter 3 . 5/29/2014
... Scratch that. Extremely rape-y.
recount chapter 2 . 5/29/2014
Nope, that was definitely rape-y.
recount chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
It's so cheesy: the everyone-wants-Harry-because-he's-so-powerful-and-desirable bit, but I'm a cheesy person and I love it.
Also, your first two sentences have dialogues that end in periods when they should be commas? I'm sorry, I'm a nit-picker, but it was the very first part of your story and oh-so noticeable ... The rest of the chapter ended up fine, so I dunno.
rell chapter 21 . 5/27/2014
I wonder what happened. I've read it a few timees and still no answer
Shygirl chapter 21 . 5/23/2014
Please please please update soon I know its been awhile but I love this story!
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