|Reviews for Sparta|
| cary99 chapter 1 . 1/30
| Coulorless Rainbow chapter 14 . 1/17
Evil, evil Sakura.
BUT FINALLY A SASUNARU FANFIC WITH SOME YURI ACTION! YESSSSSS!
Goodjob on the plot; I suck at writing anything historical and you make it sound so accurate and... right.
:( y u no update?
| Jude chapter 14 . 10/6/2013
I remember reading this amazing story when I was in high school. I'm way past that mark in my life and still I think of this amazing story every now and then and go back to re-read it over and over again. Please update, this story is amazing. And honestly it doesn't matter if the writing style is bit different, I noticed it from chapters but I still loved the story and writing style, it was perfect in it's whole, regardless of the style because underneath is this amazing story that you can't give up on, you just can't it's too good to not finish. I hope this review gives you inspiration. If not, read the few hundred reviews you've gotten from this story, I'm sure that will work wonders.
Aaaaaaand I can't help myself from not fangirling BUT PLEASE UPDATE SOON I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE PLEASE PLEAAASE!
| PuppetPrince chapter 8 . 8/25/2013
| XxObsessxLovexLivexX chapter 14 . 6/22/2013
I had kept this story on my bookmarks of my iPhone a while back and when I stumbled upon it again and read it again, it was as if I read it the first time. OMG still one of my absolute favorites (you know how you get older, your critiques of good reading changes since your middle school days and such; the majority of the "favorites" I had suddenly seemed mediocre... But YOU, my fine FINE sir and:or madam, your story still reigns all levels of BEAUTIFUL goodness. It's been a while since the last update and such, but I do hope to meet the end of this fantastic story. LOVE YOU and thanks :D
-Athena of [censored]
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/24/2013
i hope you'll still update!
i love your work! :)
| Stately Demented chapter 14 . 5/11/2013
So at first when I came across your fic, I didn't want to read it for multiple reasons. For one, you haven't updated in like two years. In my mind when an author doesn't update in such a long time it's a permanent hiatus. Probably not the case some of the time but a lot of my favorite stories haven't been updated in like six years and probably never will be updated.
The other reason is that I didn't know if you could pull the story off. I mean, I've read quite a few historical fics that try to capture the essence of that time period or the characters during that time period and they've fallen flat (literally). They try to write the characters how they are in the anime, manga, book, etc without changing the characters to fit the setting. Reading more and more fiction that had the same problem really stopped me from reading historical fics on fanfiction.
I had a lot of trepidation about starting a fic that could possibly waste my time and energy getting emotionally evolved or disappoint me. But after the first chapter I was hooked. I am so glad that I gave your story a chance! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! The transition between hate and love was really smooth. Seriously. The other amazing thing is I can tell you actually did research. I know, should be self explanatory but apparently it isn't. You don't know how many times I catch myself rolling my eyes at historical inaccuracy. Yes I get if it's minor but when you mess up what world war Hitler did what when then I lose all interest in your story.
I also really like how you made it seem..well...like Sparta. It wasn't all rainbows, unicorns, and fluff like a lot of the Naruto archive is. It seemed cold and brutal as it was back in those days. It wasn't an I-love-you-fest in the beginning. Don't get me wrong, I love happy endings and I-love-you-fests but after a nice build up occurs not just after they have sex in the first chapter. You've build up the relationship to a point where they can have those moments as long as it's not too cheesy. I can't imagine this fic being cheesy at all. Yes I get it'll have its moment but don't have them kiss with fireworks in the background and everyone clapping (metaphorically). I know not everyone will accept their relationship so please don't make it where everyone does. Unless of course with the threat of death or something as severe as that hanging over them will I accept everyone having placid acceptance. Also, please don't have them die at the end. I'm begging you! Please don't make me ball my eyes out! I'd feel like you just robbed me of my time. After all of that you just kill them off? I hate when authors do that without warnings at the beginning.
Long story short, I really like your story. I'm anxiously awaiting for the next chapter and would love you forever if you updated soon. Maybe this summer? That would be amazing! Thanks for sharing you're story and I hope you enjoyed my review and at least got something out of all this rambling.
| janiyah chapter 14 . 5/5/2013
i am in love with this story update plz :)
| x.alice03tina chapter 14 . 3/28/2013
Noo .. once again, I got to meet crazy Sakura who tried to do something awful with SasuNaru love .. God, its hurt
and to think Ino who gave her Idea and look so disappointment is so hypocrite
so Angst yet so Beautiful ..thanks my dear :)
| ThanatosKakaku chapter 14 . 3/20/2013
OMFG I love this story, I live this story, it is truly my addiction.
You are an amazing writer.
Ok, now that that's outta the way..
(Onto le-fan rant)
WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED IN LIKE 2 YEARS!
I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
CONSIDER THIS YOUR MOTIVATION, PLEASE!
| m3rriqu3 chapter 14 . 3/12/2013
I stumbled upon your FF profile through another one of my favorite FF authors, they had favorited one of your stories and after I had read it I wanted to read more by you. I absolutely adore the way you write, I've read most of your stories within a few days because I'm drawn to them and once I start reading I don't want to stop lol. Even to the point of only getting 2 hrs sleep before heading to work. I really hope you continue with this story (and the others), as I'm very curious to see how it ends, there are so many things going on at once, but it's so wonderfully put together and the story flows so smoothly. Keep up the awesome job, you've gained a new follower :P
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/2/2013
PLEASE FINISH THIS FANFIC. IT IS THE BEST SHIT I HAVE EVER READ. MY HEART AND FEELSSSSS
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
YOU NEED TO CONTINUE THIS FANFIC. IT IS THE BEST ONE I HAVE EVER READ. PLEASE SOLIDIFY YOUR AWESOMENESS IN FANFIC HISTORY AND FINISH THIS. MY HEART. AAAH.
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/29/2012
This is a great story, hope you continue with it...
| HEARTLESS angel.Sephiroth chapter 14 . 11/13/2012
I really enjoy this fanfic :D
its historicaly, as far as the name calling goes, correct; the boys have fantastic roles; their romance is well developed, and you really can see that the writing gets better towards the last chapter...maybe its time you showed us once again how good you've got over the past year...?
Will you be writing more? It really is an awesome story :D