Reviews for Loud Noises
arianabeavers12 chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
I think it's so sad she lost her baby
Norulesinlove chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
WOW! Very very good! The end was just moving and heartbreaking!
Nikitangel chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Wow. Just wow.
HayleyP chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
Absolutely brilliant. Loved it.
Ayla-K711 chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
This is good. is there going to be more?
RFK chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
Very good. This would have made an excellent flashback for Ana-Lucia.
crookedview chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
okay, so i personally HATE a-l, but your fic really captured her emotions well. you stayed true to her character, and it did make me feel bad for her. really good job, there's nothing out there right now that's like this fic.
Kate chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
No Sympathy. Someone needs to shoot her on the island, put us all out of our misery.
Pavement Chaser chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Creative. I would have never thought of writing something like this. I liked it. Update soon! :)
Osiris Ra chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Thanks guys. Glad ya liked it. Yeah, so far it's a stand alone. I'm not sure where to go with it if it was continued. That may change later though. :-)
Shadowy2012 chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
That was absolutely EXCELLENT. Simple, and just about exactly like I pictured. No uncontrollable sobs, b/c that's not Ana...just quiet somber pain. Loved this fic. You should really write more, or at least I hope you do. *two thumbs WAY up*
nikki-da-latina chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
yay! ana fic! love you already for that! lol

Great fic! Loved it... more ana fics please lol :D

was it one shot?
modernxxmyth chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
Oh wow, that was amazing. Very angsty. Brilliant work. Is it a one-shot?