|Reviews for Arana Book 1|
| Guest chapter 18 . 3/11
Just thought I'd let you know, you've been spelling Mezoti wrong in many of the chapters on your website.
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/26
Three of the children weren't actually there and then in the movie, but prefer the story with them. My only complaint is that I've hardly seen any mention of Naomi in the story (she's my favorite character). Otherwise, I love it, and I hope some day, you continue this story.
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/23
Not totally accurate, but my only complaint is that I haven't found Naomi in this at all. Other than that, it's great.
| KiwiKugai chapter 18 . 10/21/2013
In Valens name I love reading this story every so often. I really do hope that one day you get round to completing it and the other unfinished ones.
James The Kugai.
| Kell1310 chapter 18 . 10/10/2013
| RainBlueWater chapter 8 . 1/21/2013
10 out of 10
| Barbarossa Rotbart chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
Interesting story, but there are some minor mistakes:
- I really doubt that someone can serve two deities in D&D (and BTW Ilmater has his own Paladins).
- Loviatar is the goddess of death in the finnish mythology.
- Ilmater stands also for a female air spirit in the finnish mythology.
| Rain Addict CM chapter 18 . 5/7/2011
Good story, I hope there's more to come.
| rafetheratmaster chapter 18 . 3/27/2011
thought you captured the essence of the Voyager crew very well. As a Loviatar and Lolth fan I was somewhat tormented, but come to think of it you had male preists doing those attrocities and my experience is they usually go too far in a hopeless quest to crack the fem dom glass ceiling of the Lovite heirarchy. All in all I really liked it.
| Kasanra chapter 16 . 1/25/2011
Wonderful use of imagery! You had me laughing with them as well.
| Kasanra chapter 12 . 1/25/2011
YAY! I've got this little woman brouncing around in my chest, screaming with joy. (picture that squirrel from Ice Age)
It's a rather odd feeling but it makes me smile.
I love your stories. I hope you continue this soon.
| Kasanra chapter 11 . 1/25/2011
I started reading this at Passion and Perfection. i was kinda sad that this wasn't completed or longer. I'm happy I found your more completed stories at this site.
| EroSlackerMicha chapter 18 . 9/3/2009
18 wonderful chapters! And you leave it hanging like this. Please continue this very interesting story.
| Thomas chapter 18 . 8/4/2009
Fascinating story! I especially like the interaction between Seven and Arana. I hope you continue and finish this story sometime! ;)
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/18/2009
Ok, it should be obvious by now that I'm trying to read all of your fics. Trying being the key word here. Now, I don't normally give negative reviews, and I'll try not to be too negative here, but... First off, I'm reading all of your fics on your own site, and then I'm reviewing the here, for they are more complete on your own site, as you well know. THat was said just so you know that I'm reading the complete version of this and your other fics, and not the, censored stuff that exists on this site. Ok, that said, I loved the idea behind this fic, D&DStar Trek. Two parts of every geeks staple diet, combined into one meal. Brilliant idea. Of course the idea should have never worked in the first place, but yet you made it work, and work well. The problems that I have with his fic were not in your execution of combing two things that logically should never be combined, but in the presentation of the story it's self. I just don't care. At first, I was very interested in this story, and I couldn't wait to see what was going to happen next. And then, it just made me lose interest in it. There was no warning, no reason I can really see, but suddenly, this story was a chore to read instead of fun. I read fan fiction for the fun factor, not work. So, when I realized that i was truly forcing myself to read this story, which happened in this chapter, I stopped reading for a while, got off the computer and thought about this fic. Coming back to this, I decided that I really couldn't force self to read this any more, for now that is. Maybe at some time in the future I'll give this fic another shot, but for now, I can't even shudder the thought of reading more on this fic, it got that bad for me. Now while I hope that some day you'll come back to your STV fics, please, for my sake, save this for last, as I do hope you'll continue this as well for all of the people who liked it, and who knows, maybe I'll give it another shot and get over whatever made me disgusted with it, for even I'm not sure just why I can't stomach this fic right now, I only know that I can't, so... Ah well, thanks for writing this, even if I wasn't that thrilled with it, I know others were, and good bye for now. Now back to your site to try out some of your other fics that I will hopefully like more.