Reviews for Future, Past
Flamarow chapter 3 . 6/22
Certainly an interesting progression. I'm okay with the idea of Bulma and Gohan hooking up but the progression of their relationship is too unbelievable. Gohan said he was going to avoid changing her future relationship with Vegeta but now has zero guilt about having sex with Bulma and possibly erasing the possibility of Trunks existing in this timeline. Even if he wasn't thinking about it, seeing Vegeta afterwards should have at least triggered some kind of thought about what he just did...

Beyond that, I enjoyed the changes caused by Future Gohan, especially loosening the leash that Chi Chi puts on chibi Gohan so he can have friends and enjoy childhood a bit more.
Flamarow chapter 1 . 6/21
Unlocks the restrictions on the time chamber but only spends a single day in it throughout the entire 6 months... Could have entered it with shin but didn't. Not sure what to think about that. :/

Also, wonder if Bulma's crush will last and interfere with the birth of Trunks. Hope not though this doesn't look long enough for it to matter (beyond maybe the future trunks appearing).

Looks interesting so far, time to continue reading.
gabelou1991 chapter 3 . 4/22
J'aime mais tu as mis fin bizarre j'aime et bulma et gohan ouah chaud
Guest chapter 3 . 1/14
so when are you going to update !
Guest chapter 3 . 8/29/2016
That was freaking ausome you should make another chapter
meek17 chapter 3 . 3/19/2016
Why you make him and Bulma do that what happen to his sister and how about Gohan daughter pan and his wife vidal
Guest chapter 3 . 5/22/2015
Bulma is like 10 years older. She even knows that's Gohan from the supposed future.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/18/2014
Update! Please
Guest chapter 3 . 9/26/2014
Crystalzap chapter 3 . 9/8/2013
lol first time in a tournament that doesn't end in death XD and he looks 17 ;P
Joe B chapter 3 . 2/8/2013
That was of the most utter satisfaction ever!
Joe B chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
Great form of excellence!
Joe B chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Awesome job!
kidneysrgood chapter 3 . 12/18/2012
Liked this story, wish you would continue it.
Shadow fox rose chapter 3 . 6/20/2012
nice 'if gohan went back in time' story i wonder what will happen to trunks anyway update soon
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