|Reviews for Future, Past|
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/18/2014
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/26/2014
MAKE IT LONGER!
| Crystalzap chapter 3 . 9/8/2013
lol first time in a tournament that doesn't end in death XD and he looks 17 ;P
| Joe B chapter 3 . 2/8/2013
That was of the most utter satisfaction ever!
| Joe B chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
Great form of excellence!
| Joe B chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
| kidneysrgood chapter 3 . 12/18/2012
Liked this story, wish you would continue it.
| Raining Winter chapter 3 . 6/20/2012
nice 'if gohan went back in time' story i wonder what will happen to trunks anyway update soon
| Sirius Potter2 chapter 3 . 3/22/2012
Very cool story man, keep it up
| SeanHicks4 chapter 3 . 3/19/2012
Cool story, I dont think I've seen this particular set up in a 'Dragonball' redo fic. Um...bit of a random point but how could Gohan kill an already dead person on accident?
| TS24 chapter 3 . 3/19/2012
Good chapter and really happy you are back and writing again.
| xxxxxxxxx chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
I must say, captivating story, i definitely like the way the story is playing out, and out of all the "what if the story plot had gone this way", this one is new to me, I like it.
Keep up the good work, looking foward to see how this story goes!
| Crystalzap chapter 2 . 11/1/2010
heh I like the ending note to Piccolo _
| Crystalzap chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
you know he can't end up with Bulma, it's just weird and what would happen to Trunks?
| otogii chapter 2 . 7/14/2009
wot! you need to update!
because this story is awsome already!