|Reviews for Since You've Been Gone|
| StarofCalamity chapter 7 . 9/6/2009
Please post next chapter
| I want to be Jesse's girl chapter 7 . 9/22/2008
im confused is this the ending? does suze get with jesse or paul or does she even get with either of them? What happened to Jesse considering that Suze and paul saved him and all - would like to know more. Good story
| XhowtosavealifeX chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
| Isolde Eris chapter 7 . 10/27/2006
Can't wait for it!
| emptyeyes09 chapter 7 . 8/2/2006
i like what i have read so far. it's really good and i wish you would update
| Double-O-9-and-a-half chapter 6 . 7/5/2006
ok well I just realised that I hadn't finished what I wanted to funny that, because I never really stop having anything to you know there are a lot of people who like p/s and also a lot of people who like j/s,me? I like Jesse so you could just write me into your story and Jesse and I could live happily ever after and Paul and Suze could live happily ever after, I mean don't we all wish we had a Jesse in our lives, so sweet and well-mannered? Come on,
I don't sound like a freak now do I?
Hehe funny how I already knew I was a freak huh?
I'll just say what I really wanted to say
This story is freakin awesome I really can't wait to read more I'm really interested to see if there will be some biff between Jesse and Paul. Fight, fight, fight
HUGS and KISSES
| Double-O-9-and-a-half chapter 7 . 7/5/2006
that is one heck of a chapter.
it's really good.
I like the "...their fate, their lives.
It sounds kinda cliche but it fits perfectly.I really like this. can't wait to read the next chapter!
Oh and please J/S
lol but your the writer and you can make up whatever you want(ok is the hypnotising working yet? KIDDING)
carry on?you must
you must? Carry on!
| Double-O-9-and-a-half chapter 4 . 7/5/2006
Suzie Q? Have you been watching desperate Housewives?
| Bridget chapter 7 . 4/21/2006
Normally...I don't result to name-calling but...
slacker! yes, YOU!
U. what r U doing? come on...UPDATE
I think two months counts as a serious sign. ur insane if ur thinking to abandon this story.
| Caraland chapter 7 . 3/18/2006
"As for the ghost, he lived a long prosperous life. The life he got was well deserved. But, now that he is back as a restless spirit roaming the realm of the spirits, he has to correct what has been wronged. Restore the order to the universe."
You could've put those three sentences in one chapter and it would've been even more dramatic without the needless Paul and Suze stuff. We care about Jesse and Suze, duh!
| bridget chapter 7 . 3/11/2006
this chapter is not iffy! its fabulous! ur whole story is fabulous! u should be proud. D
| XxSarahxX chapter 7 . 3/10/2006
I like this chapter. It brings everything together at the climax because before you just gave us little pieces as the story progressed. It's kind of like in Twilight where it starts off with Suze's dad's death and how that changed her life, but I would've liked to see actual interaction between Suze and Paul during they're relationship b/c somehow I can't picture that in my mind. I definitely think it's a bad idea to go to Jesse's perspective b/c unlike Suze or Paul, he will never know how things previously were b/c instead of it being an erased memory, for him he never spent 150 years as a ghost...so I don't really think it makes much sense. But I like how u put Paul's point of view in the previous chapter b/c the audience needs to know that he remembers everything now. However, I'm not sure if that's a good idea to keep it that way throughout the entire story. Paul's perspective takes away some of Suze's, and I'd much rather read her's. I'm sure u could find some way to let us see what's up w/ Paul without constantly having to change the pov's. But other than that, the story is great.
| Pinkney chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
One question though: does Paul know about Jesse?
| Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 7 . 3/3/2006
i like it- it kindof describes the situation (acuaully, that's a no-brainer, but still), though it might work better as a prolouge or something
| singinshowtunes chapter 7 . 2/28/2006
huh. that was kinda weird...but in a good way.
is this a ps or a js?
i always need to know!
bleh. PUS, before i send my army of dust bunnies to DIRTY YOUR ROOM EVERY TIME YOU CLEAN IT!
(i'm so evil)