|Reviews for Rusty Communication|
| Dbzfangirl chapter 1 . 9/24
First Death Note Fic Not Bad. Bye
| kyleigh.carvalho chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
Ryuk and Raito realize that they would need Watari to get the tools into the building and to have someone come into the building, right? Lol.
| jsuislfrost chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Ah, L. Forever smart schemer
| NefariousReflection chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Yeah... Would be strangling L. Hahaha..
| Fellfire chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
i liked it! *Grins*
| Ioga chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Heh, such a cutesy thing. It begs for a tiny little extension in the end on what exactly the two need to occupy themselves with - this complex plot of L's has to have some kind of goal, right? ;) The rusting lock of the handcuffs was a nice element; I haven't seen it yet in my brief digging through of the L&Light genre.
I found three minor nitpicks, in case you're the editing type: "Raito pointes out" - points, and in the last few paragraphs: "you're ideas" - your; "good to finally get some good news for a change" - finally for a change seem like a superfluous combination.
Thanks for this!
| Zchocolatebunniesrulezworld chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Of course Ryuk waits until *after* to mention that, the perv ;D
Ah, I adore this :3 Raito's just so filled with hatred...thing is, when they were chained together, Raito had lost his memories and Ryuk's Death Note was buried in some forest, yeah? So Ryuk couldn't have been there.
Meh. This was too funny for me to care _
| Meemo1415 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
For the sake of all that is...
Oompah loompahs? It took me about 3 minutes to realize what you were referring to (shows how smart I am, !) ...
THIS WAS HILARIOUS.
| AuraBlackWolf chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
This had me smiling crazily the entire time...thank you XD
| Black-Dranzer-1119 chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
That was hilarious. I love it.
| Ricoch3t chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
lmao! Very funny
| gilbert norrell chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
I LOVE seductive!L...that was awesome! Adding to favorites!
| phoenix of hell chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
This was SO cool! Hilarious, I loved it! And well-written too!
| sea of space chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
::sigh:: Watari was bound to get mobbed/in a coma by raging oompah-loompahs, I mean how much he makes them work to keep up with L's massive sugar addiction. He never stood a chance... Poor guy.
ANYWAYS, awesome fanfiction. I wonder what they did to kill time. .
| LandUnderWave chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
*laughs* Every once in a while, L does manage to outsmart Raito...