Great story!

Omg love this , so well-written and a fantastic story!

A very powerful story...

... DAMN, man, that was dark, but when Hego basically went in to end it, I was sort of going "Hell yeah!" because just the thought of Hego ditching the freaking cliche hero is too much of an awesome moment. Downer ending, of course, but man... that was really well written. Congrats to you, man, congrats to you.

Great story. The price of victory is just too high. You also put in surprise after surprise. Most impressive.

Well done! Your story was moving. I enjoyed it. The internal conflicts and the resignation of the Supreme One felt in character to Shego's nature.

I enjoyed reading this, but the thing I loved the most was your description of the future world. They were vivid and insightful, with very in-character reasons for Shego to do all the little things she's always needled Drakken about. I also appreciated the nod to the physical similarities between Hego and the gentically-altered Drakken.

What the heck? You are so sadistic! Have you even seen A Sitch in Time? If you have, you'd know Shego wasn't THAT evil! And I also have a question: In your fan fic was it really supposed to be a dream, or the real future and Shego woke up and thought it was a dream with her traveling back? My compliment is that it's not KIGO.

Oh, my God.

Tears again...and again...

'Kay, I'm good. That was s AWESOME you don't even know. Sad, too, 'specially after she woke up. After all the fight ending with death of Hego, I honestly felt the sad vibes coming from the last handful of paragraphs.

Only complaint: for the, well, how shall I put this, "amusement" of your readers, one of these days you gotta post a story where Shego ends up with her family again:D I'd love to see that, 'specially with your writing skills.

But if you don't, that's okay. Just keep on writing.

~Jelly Bean

I actually have a question: Was her "dream" supposed to be real?

this is not one bit like shego's world.

great story, i enjoyed it

Amazing stuff. Wonderful detail, raw emotion. I really enjoyed this.

One small thing to nitpick:

"But before Shego could make any attacks with that resolution, Hego scored another hit, once more throwing Shego to the ground, coughing up blood again."

That sentance is somewhat confusing. It almost sounds like Hego is coughing up blood again. I'd suggest replacing "coughing up blood again" with "making her cough up blood again", or something else that clarifies the sentance.

I can honestly say, this is one of the most original Kim Possible stories I have ever read. Awesome job.

Nice job. I like how you handled the end, bringing her back.

Good Read!

THANKS!