Reviews for The King and Queen Diaries
crivera377082 chapter 19 . 1/13
omg reading this chapter had me ready to scream i was hoping it was a dream and towards the end i was like yes yes yes i like Brolli i feel bad for him but i like him i hate Yamcha in this story but ill get over it cant wait to see him die ...
Guest chapter 28 . 8/27/2016
It is fine but after giving birth women tend to have their periods for a long time around 19 days or more. It just seems like it would be an important factor while running away
smar0403 chapter 38 . 4/8/2016
I love this stoy it was so captivating i couldnt stop reading it. You are a wonderful and creative writer thank you for this amazing story!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2016
Good job I loved it, it was different from the Prince and Princess diaries but still just as good if not better
Guest chapter 38 . 4/1/2016
Awesome ending, but what ever happens to the other baby she was pregnant with?
cessasmm505 chapter 38 . 11/11/2015
This is by far the best fanfic about Bulma and Vegeta I have had the great pleasure to read. I do not think I have cried more for a story like I have for this one. You are a very talented writer, and I hope you continue with your craft. Bravo for both these stories!

Stevie Marie
cessasmm505 chapter 26 . 11/11/2015
Wow. Just... Wow.
Bangkok'sDevilGirl chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
Bulma had sex with Broli seriously? This is the worst thing I have ever does not make any sense and wastes my time. Even though you made a happy ending but it still lacks of Vegeta and Bulma real character and Broli?the insane Broli who is always obsessed with Goku the freak ugly Broli?You make him a hero?I love your bath time fiction but this one is crap! Sorry if I offend you but it is fiction is crap.
Aven chapter 38 . 10/20/2015
Wow..i've started reading this story years ago, but when when have not updated for really long time i stopped following sthe story and due to some events in my life stopped coming to this years and years later i remembered this story an out of curiosity went searching for it, usually i would have forgotten name of some story i read 9 years ago but it is hard to forget when it is probably the best written story i have ever read. Seeing it complete was really a nice surprise to me! So i started reading The King and Queen diaries from the beginnig, i read it in three days! Your skills as a writer are beyond great, the way you presented Vegeta-sei, Vegeta and Bulma and their relationship as you did their is just so overwhelming that many times i felt tears come to my eyes! And adding Brolli into the story and Bulmas life was a great decision, usually i would hated Bulma being with antoher man other than Vegeta but you made me really like him and i was happy that they found comfort and love in each other (i kinda knew Vegeta will come back ;). The whole story was so complex and emotional that i am looking forward to reading it again after some time... Obviusly there is alot happening in your personal life (deployment, marriage, pregnancy) but still i think it would really be a shame if you quit writing since you are so talanted. And regarding a follow up story i think it would be a wonderful idea, making me veeeery happy :)) i will be cheking your account every now and then for that follow up. I apologize for any grammat mistakes, english is not my mother tounge so it is kind of difficult to explain my thoughts about this story and your skills as a writer but i tried my best. Just want to congratulate you for finishing such a masterpiece (i've read a lot of B/V fics but never found any that captivate me as much as yours did). I wish you best of luck and i am looking forward to reading more from you! Greetings from Croatia and lots of kisses! :)) :**
Prl16 chapter 38 . 9/27/2015
Great way to end it! I almost forget about the ring. Yes, in the final scene you can feel the love.
Guest chapter 38 . 7/8/2015
I loved both stories. You really know how to create suspense in your stories.
dakotasiobhan chapter 38 . 3/26/2015
Thank you so much for this. Been reading since day one. I will always love this story and you for writing it. 3 x 1000
hime-futatsu chapter 38 . 1/19/2015
yay! it's done! what a wonderful ending to a wonderful story! i loved the whole tale from prince and princess to the end of king and queen. i love how well you developed your characters and made a beautiful unique story all your own. i'd also like to vote for the children's follow up story! thank you for your writing!
mickeymouselover chapter 38 . 1/15/2015
Simply amazing. You're a brilliant writer, thank you for a wonderful ending. I do want to read about their children, that would be awesome. Thanks for this story, I loved it!
Bulma Woman Briefs chapter 38 . 1/14/2015
Perfection as ever my friend!
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