Reviews for Altered Destiny
redbaron297 chapter 9 . 6/5
don't know why but it feels like Harry's mother is alive.
skyeza chapter 14 . 7/24/2017
This was a brilliant read, i truly enjoyed it. Its a shame its not gonna be completed but I thank you for being upfront about it and for all the hard work you've done for us the readers. So thank you for the wonderful story.
Hopefully someone else will adopted this wickedly awesome story and finish it because not knowing if Harry and Fleur get together is gonna drive me mad.
shadowpegasus16 chapter 14 . 9/5/2016
I hate the fact you stopped writing I thought I found a good story but it was just a published unfinished pice by a writer that I was starting to like you work is amazing this one in particular and you stop writing I would like to take over the story
loveginny123 chapter 14 . 7/28/2016
Is Leaena the daughter of Lily as well?
loveginny123 chapter 8 . 7/28/2016
I think the defense teacher is a vampire and I don't know why
Guest chapter 9 . 8/25/2010
Ah, we got the total reversal in with Slytherin!Harry. (In canon, at least for the people Harry interacted with, Gryffendor bravery did not equal stupidity, and the trait the Hat seemed to concentrate on for Slytherin was ambition, not cunning... and even when it DID concentrate on that it was where cunning backstabbing. Those who could plan ahead without scheming against others ended up in Ravenclaw. Slytherin!Harry usually just reverses that making Slytherins gods and Gryffendors idiots.)

Next we get the biological parents in the game. Brute!James and Saint!Lily have already made an appearance. By the way... how is James a bully, but the twins are not? The description has them as better (or worse depending on POV) than the Marauders, and both girls rejoicing in eliciting terror from those around them. But I guess they're just kind hearted and misunderstood where Jams Potter was actually mean spirited... somehow that make sense... kinda.

And then there are those poor souls in Slytherin. Those poor, defenseless children. Of course being dispised has NOTHING to do with the fact that their head of house is a total git and encourages house division, nor the fact that the most vocal portion of the house consists of the quarter to half of them who have been raised by Death Eaters or with Death Eater ideology and are not shy about being incredible bigots! Nothing to do with that at all. The poor darlings aren't racist, just misunderstood. And being painted with the same brush as the vocal (supposed) minority of the house is not their fault at all, in spite of the fact that they don't speak up and denounce their racist housemates but tacitly show support by doing nothing. Although I gotta admit, the use of Hitler and the Jews to point out the unthinking biggotry was well played. Of course, it would be better to flip it and point out that the Nazis, like the Communists under Stalin, were a severe minority and were only able to kill millions (or hundreds of millions in Stalin's case) because the general population stayed silent and refused to speak out against what they knew was knew was wrong because they were afraid. (Er... wait a minute. I'm sorry, I need to get rid of that observation. Why, it almost sounded like I was saying thost "poor defenseless Slytherins" were like those folks who sat around and did nothing while Hitler and Stalin killed millions of their fellow humans, in most cases countrymen. That can't be right! Those Slytherins are poor... and, and defenseless... and, and innocent! THEY are the oppressed. Not the mudbloo- er, I mean muggleborns.)

And in the end... Mistress Raven showing up as the DADA prof. I really was shocked. Promise. (BTW... any chance we're gonna see Mistress Raven wearing something in leather or rubber or barbed wire? Maybe a riding crop to go with that, or even a ball gag for those in detention? I have to admit, it's not my personal cup of tea, but it would be par for the course.)

Ahhh... that felt nice. Been a long time since I could let loose with a nice, scathing review. And yes, it IS a review and not a "flame". You can tell the difference fairly easily... A scathing review is critical, perhaps caustically so, of your story elements such as plot or characterization. A flame is critical of you as a person and offers no rational explaination as to why they think a story element is poorly done. (I may have used sarcasm, but I DID point out what I did and didn't like explicitely.)

The only down side is that, as an abandoned fic, it's not likely that the author is even reading these anymore. Still, it might prove entertaining for any other readers who happen across the story and browse the reviews, like I do.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/25/2010







Twin Mary Sue Vampires.

I must be in fanfic Hell. No! Wait a minute. If I were in fanfic Hell, it would also be a sexually explicite Harry/Draco story written by a 13 year old fangirl. I must just be in fanfic Purgatory.

The sad part is... there's nothing else left to read. I love the Harry/Fleur pairing, and that aspect of the story has actually been quite good. Still, I feel all dirty inside reading through this Anne Rice/Twilight trash just to get a glimpse of that pairing.

(And for the record: If you as author can ignore canon and write whatever the hell you like in a story, then I as reader can ignore your preferences and respond however the hell I like to that story. At least as long as you've got anon-reviews still going.)
Guest chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
Uhg... godlike!OC's, and vampires no less. Oh well, as the author's note says: vote with your feet. Still, if you invite or encourage comment then bitching 'bout comments you don't like is kinda retarded. At any rate, the story is still readable dispite it's faults. And since it's abandoned this comment really doesn't matter much anyway. heh
edahcsmac chapter 14 . 8/23/2010
that last chapter was so creepy! i had nightmares!
noylj chapter 10 . 6/6/2009
Has anyone mentioned that "women" is plural ( more than one woman)?
noylj chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
Don't abandon story. Don't know what Harry is like and it is too lateI assume. The only canon possibilities would be Ron (oh god no) or Nev. Everyone else is a blank slate. Could be male!Blaise, but I prefer a somewhat slutty, hot for Harry female!Blaise.
mcgurrin chapter 14 . 4/29/2009
I liked it.
Ileah chapter 14 . 4/22/2009
I know it's my own fault for picking this story up abandoned. But for the Super!Harry thing, you can't deny that Harry ALWAYS wins, even in the official books, there's just a bit more conflict areound the other charachters making him depressed and such. But more plot and fewer powers (or slower to get / activate them) would be an imporvement in any / all stories / the books. One thing I always stick with, though, is that Harry (or whoever the main charachter is) needs an animagus form (because I like animals) and even if they don't have to be the kid-who-lived, they need to be able to kick major butt even if they're not gonna kill Voldy.

Sorry about the rantingness, just getting my opinion out somewhere. And for what it's worth: It wasn't that bad to read, just a bit predictable.
Fortune's Phantom chapter 14 . 3/24/2009
I've got to say that I was quite disapointed when I saw that this story was over. I thought it was an extremely good story, and the only vamp!Harry story I have ever liked. I know that I'm not going to change your mind about not continuing this story, especially after so long and the amount of people that have surely said the same thing, but I just thought I'd give my ten cents for the story. In all honesty, and don't take this the wrong way, since I haven't read the re-write, but it looks like this would have been a much better story than the re-write will be...but I suppose that I could be wrong...either way, I just hope you know how good this story really was...even though I'm reviewing it about two years after you stopped writing it.
FanFictionAddict13 chapter 14 . 1/29/2009
i was very confused in the first few chapters and the progression of time wasn't clear, like in the first chapter with harry as a 16 year old i was under the impression that he was still 11 getting into brawl fights and going to hogwarts. the plot was great... if you keep it up you'll become an even better writer, more flow and consistantcy(sp?) will go into your writing and it will be more understandable and i won't have to back track chapters to make sure i understood small parts of it, like harry's age. and i'm sure that your next fic will be awesome!
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