|Reviews for Where Has My Heart Gone|
| narnias no.1fan chapter 1 . 1/9
Aww that's so sad and so nice at the end when she sees Aslan I listened to that song that's in the story and it's a good song
| Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
This is a good story. I like how you described Susan's feelings, and the scene where Aslan forgave her and welcomed her home.
| DreamMakersMagic chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
i enjoyed it D
| Kelsey Estel the TolkieNarnian chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
This was so sad! I cried!
| Nebu chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
This rocked. I was really upset when I read the ending and It didn't say anything about her. Thank you for writing this.
| Capegio chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
I'll have to take a look at that song. Watch out for conventions - you're missing apostrophes for the posessive forms of some of these words, and you have a few Arbitrary Capitalizations. Also, it's Edmund, not Edmond. Good basic idea, work on expressing it more clearly.