Reviews for Sideways
Kori chapter 3 . 4/11/2006
*squeals lika a fan-girl*

Nu you must not stop there I wanna see what happens to Puddle!

*attaches herself to writers es and puts of the 'Puppy-Eyes-of-Doomnation 3: Aka pleas keep going this amuses me.'*

Update! Pwease?
Crystalline Tears chapter 3 . 3/13/2006
OMG im so in love with this story! I havent laughed so hard while reading for a very long time. The randomness, the pretentious Riku monologues, the sexual tension! its all so awesome. oh and I adore the Cloud/Leon interaction (the fork incident!) but you really do need to put more of them in the next chapter-please?

anyway, pleasee update soon!
Kuroneko Hikage chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
"At this stage, my eyes had probably fallen out of my head and were rolling feebly about the floor before being carted away by an army of dust-bunnies."

That had to be the best line in the entire chapter. XD

*Twirls onward to Chappie two*
AXENATOR chapter 3 . 3/5/2006
OMG PUDDLE? hehe I wonder what's going to happen with that. And look! It was the word I used for the title of my story! I'm too lazy to type it in eheh. ANd thne you used the word Sidways, like your title! I was so estatic about the title of your story in the story. I don't know why but that was excellent!

Hehe the Grammer... where was it? Grr... I read this story ove two days and now I can't find that... Grammer.. thing Riku said. Well it was really funny hehe. And I was laughing my head off because Riku didn't know what was in Sora's pants. hehe!

I feel proud that I am learning so many new words from your story. Although, I might never use them because my vocabulary is very limited and I hang around people who are limited to "yo,dawg,'sup" and various curses.

clap excellent chapter!
SireenC chapter 3 . 3/4/2006
Omg... Okay, the last sentence made me die of laughter. I *loved* the section with Riku, Sora, Rikku, and Mr. Gippykins...complete *greatness*! Your whole story is phenomenal...forgive me if that's spelled wrong. I love everything...the dialogue and the narration...your words are amazing. There's some I've never seen before, and that's saying something, because I read a lot. :D Fantastic...very, very funny...I love it, if you haven't gathered that yet. Keep writing! I am excitedly awaiting the next chapter, whenever you find the time to write and post it. Your chapters are very long! :) Which is good. I can imagine how long it would take you to write and perfect them while "playing along in real life," lol.
Covenant-Dance117 chapter 2 . 3/4/2006
Wow... This is the best sr I've read in a while... PLEASE UPDATE SON.
Verre chapter 3 . 3/3/2006
Whatever insane, sugar-run realm you're getting these plot ideas from, keep it comming! Loved the Rikku cameo. Any chance I can get a copy of her sex manual? Will we be seeing more of her or Gippal? (don't die, Gippykins!)

Riku's melodramatic rants are always enjoyable.

Favorite quote: Take that, world! I can seduce a boy that probably still believes in Santa!

As always, thanks for the laugh.
Lorialet chapter 2 . 2/7/2006
Oh god. That was without a doubt the funniest thing I've read in months. I adore you. Please continue it!
AXENATOR chapter 2 . 2/6/2006
Hehe! That was entertaining. I liked Puddle. xD Seriously, that would be a fitting name cause its water... and clouds make water and a squall uh... yeah hehe. But I wouldn't name my kid that.

I liked your description of how they plyed DDR. I could picture them in my mind hehe.
bladegryphon chapter 2 . 2/5/2006
-picks up jaw from the floor- I'm not sure if it fell down there because of Leon smiling or the hilarity of the chapter, but either way, it's great! Keep up the good work :D
ShadowedDarkness chapter 2 . 2/4/2006
Heather says, she likes. Despite the rather large words (that have been needed to be looked up X.x) that are through out the whole story, I like it

And hey, I'm learning new vocab along the way XD

Well wont my English teacher be happy. Anywho's, great story, update soon,


..forgot what I was going to say. Oh well. Update soon, ya?

*adds to favorites list* WHe!

Darkness-heart chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Omg! I love this story, it's so hilarious. You really have a way with words, and I love all the descriptive words. Riku is intelligent! This is one of my favorite stories.. please update soon!
Verre chapter 2 . 2/3/2006
I am IN LOVE with this story. I haven't laughed so hard in weeks. Thank you!

I hope to hear more about the status of Leon and Cloud's love-child. And more Riku rambles, of course.

I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
bob the builder chapter 2 . 2/3/2006
::giggles insanely:: oh lordy. this is an insanely good fic and i think it sucks that you only have 5 reviews. so i'll give you more! MORE REVIEWS! THE ENDING OF THIS CHAPTER MADE ME LAUGH! OH GOD AND CLOUD'S MY LITTLE PONY NAME! DEFINATELY a porn star. without a doubt...

Ace-of-Wands chapter 2 . 2/3/2006
Yay! Another chapter! *dances*

Love the story... sorry I haven't reviewed before now, too lazy! XP

Really love all the jokes and humour and its just so funny!

Update soon puh-lease!
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