Reviews for Like Water Falling
deleteitdeleteitdeleteit chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
I admit I was caught off gaurd when it was Shane. But it was a sort of pleasant suprise. Very comforting sort of feeling through out the whole journey. What I like about your writing is, even if it's something so short and simple as this is, the details you provide make it all sound so marvelous. Awesome.
The Crying Willow chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
I love how you've shown little details here - the cellphone, the pancakes, the newspapers, the Tai Chi. This is exactly how she'd act.
Truest Tears chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
I did not appreciate the swear-word at the end. Perhaps it was called for, as she was leaving, and needed a new life, a new way of speaking.

The vision of water falling was genius.

It really set the tone.

-Truest Tears-