|Reviews for Like Water Falling|
| SilentJubilee chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
I admit I was caught off gaurd when it was Shane. But it was a sort of pleasant suprise. Very comforting sort of feeling through out the whole journey. What I like about your writing is, even if it's something so short and simple as this is, the details you provide make it all sound so marvelous. Awesome.
| The Crying Willow chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
I love how you've shown little details here - the cellphone, the pancakes, the newspapers, the Tai Chi. This is exactly how she'd act.
| Truest Tears chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
I did not appreciate the swear-word at the end. Perhaps it was called for, as she was leaving, and needed a new life, a new way of speaking.
The vision of water falling was genius.
It really set the tone.