|Reviews for Bite|
| OnceUponATime102 chapter 10 . 5/11/2013
great story, love this!
| Curious6 chapter 10 . 4/10/2013
"But when Dean regained himself, he glanced at Sam and smiled. It was the most beautiful thing Sam had ever seen."
YES! C': I love the definitely-happy-because-Dean's-alive-ending but what still lingers is that John had to kill an old friend, Dean was freaking traumatized and almost died, and especially the whole point of his thing with Nicolette. It really made me feel like this was the perfect prequel to the show, or the perfect way to lead into Sam's desire to live a normal life aside from hunting.
| Curious6 chapter 9 . 4/10/2013
"Then he would call his Dad, borrow some scrubs, because Sammy had looked so cute in them,"
I can't tell you how much I love that
"Sam blamed himself for almost everything. It was a quirk of his, one of many, that Dean wished he'd outgrow."
Sad, but so accurate :
"He was getting up there to "I'm playing poker with death and all I have is a pair of twos" scared."
You characterize Dean Winchester so feaking well. But jesus FFF let me tell you, if I were Dean I'd have choked on my sobs by now!
| Curious6 chapter 8 . 4/10/2013
"To let her husband do all this inside the house, the woman had to be a tough broad."
Oh, Dean XD.
| Curious6 chapter 7 . 4/10/2013
"If someone died because he wanted to write a stupid Civics essay, he'd feel terrible."
"Without Dean there as a middle man, Sam realized he didn't really know what to say to his father."
"Sam figured that John had worked so hard on making himself a leader of their little team that now he didn't know how to turn it off and go back to being the father they'd grown up with."
"The only things Dean had no problem confessing his attachment to was music and cars, two things which seemed to be the only thing John would ever admit to getting enjoyment from."
All these things have made me so...so sad..
| Curious6 chapter 5 . 4/10/2013
"If by ditzy blonde coroner friend you mean your future daughter-in-law, then yes." Sam couldn't help but chuckle at that. He tried not to let on that he noticed the triumphant look on both his brother and his father's face.
Love it :')
| Curious6 chapter 4 . 4/10/2013
"How many licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie pop?"
I fucking lost it XD.
| Curious6 chapter 3 . 4/10/2013
"I don't kiss younger guys,"
"Good, neither do I."
Dean is quite the charmer XD.
| Curious6 chapter 2 . 4/10/2013
"He knew that if Dean ever needed his help, he wouldn't hesitate to give it to him. Even if it was something as stupid and childish as recovering from the flu. But if Dean could be stubborn, the so could he."
I love that, it's so spot-on.
| Curious6 chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
"It was amazing how much Dean had that effect on him."
"The question was sincere and held no teasing at all. That was a quality in Sam that John was sure he'd gotten from his mother."
"But when Dean's smile slowly faded, he realized that Dean wasn't kidding around, he was actually being serious. 'If school is something you really want to do, you'll figure something out.'"
I love it so far :). It's very well-written and I'd love to see where it goes from here.
| Psycho33 chapter 6 . 10/29/2010
| hoodietime chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Hey, just letting you know that this fic has been recced on the latest post over at the LJ comm hoodie_time. ;) You can find the link in my profile.
| Jade chapter 10 . 3/2/2009
Dude! That was amazingly well written! I wasn't so sure when I started to read it but after the first three paragraphs, I was hooked. I was really impressed how you managed to keep all the characters almost identical to their originals. Lots of fanfictions mess up the boys' attitudes or characters, but you didn't. Fantastic job! Great read!
| NongPradu chapter 9 . 1/24/2009
Well no wonder you freaked yourself out with this chapter. Holy guacamole! Those are some terrifyingly disgusting zombies. and reading about them, especially under the circumstances you've set up, is bone-chillingly scary. The sounds they were making, banging into the cages, before we even saw them, had my skin crawling.
My hat off to you for the suspense and horror!
| NongPradu chapter 4 . 1/24/2009
I know you published this ages ago, but I'm just discovering it now, and can I just say it is seriously AWESOME! The build-up is really good so far. Getting steadily creepier with each chapter. I knew it wasn't going to be a freakin' werewolf!
And lucky me, the whole thing's completed so I get to read it all in one go. :)