Reviews for 30 Kisses: Jaden and Alexis
IsntThatPersonal1gmail.com chapter 20 . 4/19
I will stick with you, but I hope you get to add more chapter to this story soon.
penis chapter 3 . 1/11
so how exactly is this 30 kisses? so far its just been a plot development in my eyes, its not all bad tho it just seems like u jumped around fast like one moment he was sick the next he is late for class
Guest chapter 20 . 10/4/2014
Write more! I wanna see the kissing!
David chapter 20 . 7/18/2014
I like your stories but I would like a closer relation with Jaden and Alexis with both admitting to each other there feelings. You could let it take place in the place they fount on the other side of the forest they wanted to keep secret with Jaden finally asking her on a date for serious and not a joke. p.s your doing great
ScarletEmperor chapter 20 . 7/1/2014
I do believe you requested feedback from an actual login account, as to respond with greater ease, yes? Well, for the Reccord, this story promises me enough to go out of my way to do so, so take that as you will. I'm sorry that you're losing inspiration, but I do enjoy your writing. That being said, it does kind of show. Two things I'd hope to see in 10 future chapters(assuming you choose to continue, or I don't somehow offend you): #1, Take some librities from S2 forward. Many interesting characters and plot points are introduced, and Jaden saves Alexis and co. at the risk of his own life numerous times, and I'd love to see your spin on those events, with Alexis's heart in her throat. Secondly, why not mix up this series of "love stories" with some romantic fluff? Most of the time, I grant you, it gets in the way. But the Fic's labeled "30 Kisses" for Christ's sake, and I'm currently only counting four. It's still fantastic writing, make no mistake, but I almost mistook this last chapter as one from a Fic where Jaden & Alexis are nothing but seriously good dueling friends. Still, keep at it, you've got something really good going on here.
GoldenScarlet chapter 13 . 7/1/2014
Didn't Jaden save Jasmine from that dueling monkey? You'd think she'd warm to him a tad after that. Still, I absolutely love this Fic.
GoldenScarlet chapter 5 . 7/1/2014
Bastion keeps Valentine chocolate in his jacket...
You know what, on second thought, I'm not surprised, just curious. What else does he hide in there? His deck? A frisbee? House keys? Pager? Pocket knife? Bloody knife? A puppy? Or all the above?
LAVenus111213 chapter 20 . 5/10/2014
I love it! Keep going! _
Silver and Gold Angels chapter 6 . 10/30/2013
Yo, Uh. Word. Adjective. Pronoun. Adverb.
Run on and on and on.
Where my gerunds at?
Parenthetical, uh.

Shit motherfucker ass tits cunt cock motherfucker shit ass tits motherfucker shit
Come on
Fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck

Shit motherfucker ass tits cunt cock motherfucker shit ass tits motherfucker shit
Come on
Fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck

You take some shit, put it up on the wall, check it out for a while.
You take that shit up off of the wall, put it down on the floor in a glass bowl.
You take some fuck, put it up on the wall where the shit used to be.
You take that fuck up off of the wall, put it down on the floor
with the shit in a glass bowl
What? Yo, here's another little piece of advice-vice

You take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

Take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

It's a stack of fuck-shit on top of itself, nigga

I make references to weaponry
Ancient, on you
I wear bullet-proof vests for no apparent reason
other than to create a false sense of importance
of which I could never retain on my own.
I like to create a buffer memory of incredulity
So y'all motherfuckers could never get near to me.

I'm a cartoon character.
You'll never be able to be like me! (me me)

I like women
I like women
I like the concept of a woman
I like to take that concept and reduce it to an object
I like to take those objects and put 'em in my videos
Have them shake they jiggly bits so they looks like hoes

I like to take some car polish, smear it all over they asses
and buff that shit out so it looks like fresh peaches and shit.
I like to take some more of that car polish and smear it all over they tits
and buff that shit out so it looks all sparkly, like diamond necklaces and shit.

Why?

Cuz I'm a lady's man
a lady's man
a la-la-la-la-la-la-la-la-lady's man

I'm a materialist.
I'm a materialist.
I'll take a piece-of-shit car and I'll lower the motherfuckah;
Put some 18-inch rims on the motherfuckah;
Take some neon, put it underneath the motherfuckah
so when I roll around this town it looks like a hover (hover hover)

I like to take a flat-panel display monitor,
put one on the steering column,
one inside of the glovebox,
one on top of the dashboard,
two in back of the headrests,
one mounted in the ceiling,
two still in the motherfucking packaging, on the back seat
so when my motherfucking friends go and sit on the shit and break it (word?)
I can honestly say:

I. Just. Don't. Give. A. Fuck.

You take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

Take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

Take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

Take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

It's a stack of fuck-shit on top of itself, nigga

Yo, where my girls at?
Where my girls at?
Where my grills at?
Where my grills at?

Where my girls at?
Where my girls at?
Where my grills at?
Where my grills at?
(Where is they?)

Fuck shit, fuck shit,
Fuck shit, fuck shit

Fuck shit, fuck shit,
Fuck shit, fuck shit
Guest chapter 17 . 8/28/2013
NICE STORY BUT OTHR STORIES HAVE SEX
Guest chapter 16 . 8/26/2013
This is the best fanfic ive read so far
peter chapter 4 . 8/20/2013
alexis is just as old as jaden and they entered the duel acedemy the same year so how is she finished before jaden?
peter chapter 3 . 8/20/2013
no its ok
tahmid chapter 20 . 8/2/2013
this is so fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck!
Guest chapter 20 . 7/30/2013
nice man keep up the good work
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