Reviews for 30 Kisses: Jaden and Alexis
amh2805246 chapter 6 . 7/13
Nice one Jaden.
amh2805246 chapter 14 . 4/10
Jaden your kindness knows no bounds
amh2805246 chapter 13 . 4/10
For shame Jasmine. For shame
amh2805246 chapter 11 . 4/10
Jaden you are the man
amh2805246 chapter 9 . 4/10
Way to go Jaden
amh2805246 chapter 8 . 4/10
Nice one Jaden
amh2805246 chapter 7 . 4/10
Chazz you finally did something right for once
amh2805246 chapter 4 . 4/9
You got that right Jaden.
amh2805246 chapter 2 . 4/8
Jaden the objective of medicine is not taste good but to make you feel good.
Guest chapter 20 . 1/11/2016
Amazing
IsntThatPersonal1gmail.com chapter 20 . 4/19/2015
I will stick with you, but I hope you get to add more chapter to this story soon.
penis chapter 3 . 1/11/2015
so how exactly is this 30 kisses? so far its just been a plot development in my eyes, its not all bad tho it just seems like u jumped around fast like one moment he was sick the next he is late for class
Guest chapter 20 . 10/4/2014
Write more! I wanna see the kissing!
David chapter 20 . 7/18/2014
I like your stories but I would like a closer relation with Jaden and Alexis with both admitting to each other there feelings. You could let it take place in the place they fount on the other side of the forest they wanted to keep secret with Jaden finally asking her on a date for serious and not a joke. p.s your doing great
ScarletEmperor chapter 20 . 7/1/2014
I do believe you requested feedback from an actual login account, as to respond with greater ease, yes? Well, for the Reccord, this story promises me enough to go out of my way to do so, so take that as you will. I'm sorry that you're losing inspiration, but I do enjoy your writing. That being said, it does kind of show. Two things I'd hope to see in 10 future chapters(assuming you choose to continue, or I don't somehow offend you): #1, Take some librities from S2 forward. Many interesting characters and plot points are introduced, and Jaden saves Alexis and co. at the risk of his own life numerous times, and I'd love to see your spin on those events, with Alexis's heart in her throat. Secondly, why not mix up this series of "love stories" with some romantic fluff? Most of the time, I grant you, it gets in the way. But the Fic's labeled "30 Kisses" for Christ's sake, and I'm currently only counting four. It's still fantastic writing, make no mistake, but I almost mistook this last chapter as one from a Fic where Jaden & Alexis are nothing but seriously good dueling friends. Still, keep at it, you've got something really good going on here.
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