|Reviews for Hidden Wager|
| Dragonjek chapter 2 . 4/3
You've built up the attraction much too fast between characters who hardly know one another. Also, what was with Keitaro throwing a sword "on reflex"? He doesn't have throwing-things reflexes, he has running and dodging reflexes. He doesn't have the finesse to use a freaking _katana_ to cut through someone's sash, much less their chest bindings, and neither the skill nor experience to throw a sword at all, especially with enough strength to shove it deep enough into the wood for it to be considered "embedded".
Additionally, why does Keitaro think that Tsuruko cares so much about her family when she showed herself to be perfectly willing to shatter her sister's dreams?
| volosaraptor chapter 2 . 6/25/2015
Hey i love the story it was a great idea to put a twist in it im hopein that u will finish it i notest that u havent updated it in years if uare not gunna finish it can u plz put down that u have discontiued it and get somone else to finish it is a real shame it is only two chaptees in there is a lot of potentual in this story so plz continue it
| code R.R chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
lol sucks for the girls
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/6/2013
I was just wondring of u were bringing out another chaptor coz this story is fantastic i love the fact that tsuruko got to marry keitaro i think they are a gd couple carnt wait for the next chaptor keep up the gd work
| Richy1991 chapter 2 . 1/9/2012
| volosaraptor chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
great story when is the next chaptor commin out keep it up
| MaceEcam chapter 2 . 10/19/2009
Why, WHY do all the wonderful stories go unfinished?
| Warrior Moon Okiro Zangetsu chapter 2 . 12/4/2008
KU KU. Now aint this a special pairing... Oh well, its both cool and fun. So go with it
| nightwing27 chapter 2 . 4/12/2008
man that was nice chapter I hope there's more
| nightwing27 chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
nice start it was a good chapter
| Zero Asakura chapter 2 . 3/6/2008
this is quite good
and is a pairing i do love to read, but isn't much common
would you update it, please?
do your best!
| Mike Kromer chapter 2 . 9/20/2007
Man this is good, keep up the good work, I would like another chapter up soon
| Destinyends chapter 2 . 8/4/2007
awsm story keep it up. i like that naru and Motoko finally got a piece of whats coming to them.
| artfuldodger7 chapter 2 . 7/16/2007
great...i like this kei and tsu pairing, i hope u dont make him too powerful yet.
| RandonDude chapter 2 . 6/27/2007
:D YAY plz continue
:( not the best story but it's very interesting
:) Thx 4 the fic plz keep writeing/typeing it
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