Reviews for Confession
GreenAndZen chapter 8 . 10/7/2016
*stands up and applauds*

What a story. Your writing is very unique putting what's going on in the character's mind all out there without a fight or pretence. Jackie without her shallow, materialistic facade and Hyde without his zen mask. Each of them are so sure of what they feel, you have given great strength to each of the characters, having them make hard decisions, go through mind-numbing heartache and come out victorious at the end of the battle between mind and heart.

GreenAndZen chapter 7 . 10/7/2016
Thank you for writing Fez like this. It is so refreshing and the whole chapter speaks volumes about the Jackie/Fez dynamic. At the core, they are the best of friends and that's all there is to it. A bittersweet farewell between the two. This was like a 'Fuck you' to the season 8 makers/writers for attempting to draw out a courtship stemming from insecurities when what really exists is a beautiful friendship. It's almost vulgar.

You have explored the true essence and have written a truly touching scene.
GreenAndZen chapter 6 . 10/7/2016
So much heart in this story. Brilliant.
GreenAndZen chapter 5 . 10/7/2016
You have spelled out every emotion, the pain, the fear, the anger, the hope, the want, the need, so crystal-clearly, it blows my mind. I stopped reading and started watching the whole scene ensue in front of my eyes.

Jackie and Hyde are both fighting for themselves and them and the war is so poignantly beautiful. And this time, Jackie will not lose. Neither will Hyde.

The whole exchange was fantastic and flowed so naturally, I am speechless. You are VERY good at this, my friend. Very good. This and the previous chapter shows how greatly you have understood the depth of their connection, how deep Jackie's wounds have cut into, and how intense Hyde's remorse is for his distrust and apathy when it comes to the love of his life. And mostly, how well you have worded Hyde's love for Jackie deserves praise. It may seem OOC, but is it, really? When one is trying to hold on to their lifeline, idiosyncrasies are forgotten and all that matters is survival.
GreenAndZen chapter 4 . 10/7/2016
Amazing amazing showdown! Though things didn't end favourably, every word that escaped their mouths was the whole truth. A perfect exchange between hurting lovers. Superb writing. And Hyde's resolve despite Jackie's repeated rejection is heartwarming! And his final argument followed by that scorching kiss was like a thunderbolt!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/17/2015
I'm at chapter 3. I think it's great that you gave her an ally and that she found it in Red. It's kind of sweet. It would be really sweet if it was like more of a father/daughter thing. But it's almost too intense like Red is in love with her or something. But it's still cute so far.
MistyMountainHop chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
I love that it's Red Jackie confided in. That's freakin' awesome. As is his support of her - and what he told Hyde.
buffyangelinfinitdesire chapter 9 . 6/1/2010
yay! someone FINALLY made him grovel!
icanseeformiles chapter 1 . 1/24/2010

only on the first chapter but i loved that list line. so red.

this is really sad though. but i love it so far! :D
Jaelyss chapter 9 . 5/26/2009
Nice. I really believe the Red/Jackie friendship as he always did have soft spot for her. I wish the show had ended this way. Off to read the sequel!
angel2goddess chapter 9 . 3/24/2009
Oh that was good! Made me cry, that end did. Beautiful story, beautiful, very well-written, the only problems I had with it were some slight grammatical and spelling errors, but good lord, nobody is perfect, including me! All in all, a fantastic story!
a chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Go Red!

This is a great start...
brucasfanatic chapter 8 . 11/10/2007
that was the most perfect ending i have EVER READ. EVER. Oh should see how wide my eyes are right was just so real! I adored every. single. part. of it! I'm practically squeeing like a school girl here. this is perfect. Hyde and Jackie are definetely a couple that would work out in the future. I personally think they were the strongest written couple ever, just b/c there was always something there from the beginning, and we saw their feelings evolve. You are a brilliant writer, and I think you should stick to writing mature HydeJackie relationship. Because that is always the harder one to write, and you're absolutely amazing in it!

reading your other story now...
brucasfanatic chapter 7 . 11/10/2007
awwee! so the whole Jackie and Fez think in S8 repulsed me to no end. but i always did enjoy their girly friendship. ) this was a sweet chapter, sad but sweet. And I hate Donna in s8, based on what i've heard. Oh, and I hate Wilmer for forcing the writers to pair him with Jackie...but anyways...

brucasfanatic chapter 6 . 11/10/2007
the scene with Hyde and Kitty literally gave me chills. I teared up at the part where he confessed that he didn't think he was good enough for Jackie. It's such a Hyde thing to say. Its funny because this chapter made me realize that I adore the HydeKitty mother/son relationship as much as I adore the Red/Jackie one. Funny, huh...

anyways, next
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